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It's so fleeting when you look at it like that. The imagery of growth is wonderfully done, Kexby.  

I have stripped away everything that makes a poem. A list of facts no more nothing superfluous.A lot of poetry suffers from over wieght.Thanks for commenting Ahavati

The circle and cycle, I love the poem...neat.:) Kexby.

Thankyou Grace . .a little experiment I hope to develop perhaps ech poem can have its own individual style not to be repeated

there's no room for chafe in this field - a fine write as the soil turns

Thankyou whale as you can read I have stripped the poem to its basics.I began with a 'normal poem then picked out the salient points not quite like the oriental styles. whether this  can be achieved in reverse   remains to be seen.This is precis. Like most writers I am often too verbose.The most important part of any work of art comes the moment when the artist has to decide on its ending . . . .the last brush stroke . . . . ..final punctuation  . . .what kind of cadence . . . the last word. Are those last three lines necessary ? . . . . . .Often we keep on writing when ideas are exhausted rather like squeezing the orange when nothing remains, the result can be an excess of sweet and sentimental dross.I have not expressed myself very well Thankyou for calling Whale

Most definitely stripped to minimum but then we don't need more.
I must try this style more often, there's much to be studied here.

This is the extreme of what I try to achieve.I spend more time pairing down my stufff than composing . . . . the floor is littered with discarded words after writing likewise grammar has a hard time.I am guilty as most poets in being too long winded,often we have made a point yet carry on repeating the same themes Thankyou for your comments Vee.