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Invisible
Now you see me
now you dont
Im over here
Im over there
Being pulled from the darkness
where I love it so much
Only to be blinded by your forgiving light
Let me alone
leave me be
If I close my eyes
will you still see me?
now you dont
Im over here
Im over there
Being pulled from the darkness
where I love it so much
Only to be blinded by your forgiving light
Let me alone
leave me be
If I close my eyes
will you still see me?
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Re. Invisible
Anonymous
10th Mar 2017 4:57am
Awesome
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Re. Invisible
10th Mar 2017 9:55am
Short but very very nice spill my dearest...
Just one thing, I think you meant in ur last line... " will you still SEE me?"... if I'm wrong I apologize...
Just one thing, I think you meant in ur last line... " will you still SEE me?"... if I'm wrong I apologize...
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10th Mar 2017 1:02pm
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10th Mar 2017 1:53pm
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12th Mar 2017 8:23pm
Re. Invisible
Being pulled from the darkness
where I love it so much
Only to be blinded by your forgiving light
That's the crux of the cowering, Mysterious One. Grace so shiny it blinds us, doesn't it?
Especially when we're crouched in the darkness away from judgement.
where I love it so much
Only to be blinded by your forgiving light
That's the crux of the cowering, Mysterious One. Grace so shiny it blinds us, doesn't it?
Especially when we're crouched in the darkness away from judgement.
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12th Mar 2017 8:23pm
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Re. Invisible
12th Mar 2017 00:37am
That forgiving light, when it comes in the form of unwanted preaching, is an illumination you may want to do without. I love the last line. I call it the "ostrich syndrome" applying it to me as I bury my head in the sand and pray for invisibility. Never seems to work for some reason. Fine work MysteriousLady!
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Re: Re. Invisible
12th Mar 2017 8:25pm
Thanks Crow. I totally agree with you. No it doesnt work. Some how Im always seen. <3
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