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I swallowed the moon
became pregnant with her
& gave birth to stars
that have mouths to speak
wonders of the universe
each numbered unto infinity
they have eyes
which bare witness
to all that has unfolded
from now until the beginning of time
keeping record
they know all
a shooting star
another lost soul to the cosmos
it trails blood as it falls
crashing into the Earth
a vision to behold this dead rock
the spirit of it held inside
do you know you hold the keys
to the universe round your neck?
angelic and demonic forces
hurling nature around
vying for your attention
what do you see as you traverse
do you see chaos and confusion
or beauty and order?
dark, light they each have their place
I swallowed the moon
became pregnant with her
& gave birth to stars
that have mouths to speak
wonders of the universe
see it now in all its glory
today is a new day
may it open your mind
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
Published 4th Mar 2017
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4th Mar 2017 10:49am
Aw..this is beautiful Crimsin poetess! its a speaking piece ..
"do you know you hold the keys
to the universe round your neck?" ..these verses esp. i love. the repeating stanzas too.
lovely conception here lady. stellar scribe n i need to treasure. shine on.tq xx
"do you know you hold the keys
to the universe round your neck?" ..these verses esp. i love. the repeating stanzas too.
lovely conception here lady. stellar scribe n i need to treasure. shine on.tq xx
4th Mar 2017 11:23am
Anonymous
4th Mar 2017 11:30am
and to this i say
aum
xo
that is all
aum
xo
that is all
Anonymous
4th Mar 2017 11:57am
Brenda.. simply brilliant.. just blown away, by your magic ink.. into the list it goes.. love..
Dave
Dave
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Anonymous
4th Mar 2017 2:17pm
Breathtaking piece here. The picture gave it an extra dimension, but it was a gorgeous all on its own merit. Very nice!
Anonymous
4th Mar 2017 3:18pm
My Beautiful Brenda, this is a vision of splendor...magically sweeping me off my feet...I don't even know how else to put my feelings for this into words my love...
I love you so very much!
Xoxo Taryn
I love you so very much!
Xoxo Taryn
4th Mar 2017 3:54pm
Absolutely, look for the new day and allow it to
consume you with its breathtaking newness.
Allow yourself to be concerned only with what
this new day creates for you and live, live, live!
consume you with its breathtaking newness.
Allow yourself to be concerned only with what
this new day creates for you and live, live, live!
4th Mar 2017 4:03pm
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5th Mar 2017 5:07am
Such a deep and meaningful write. Touched my heart with this one.
Greatness 🤗
Greatness 🤗
5th Mar 2017 8:45am
Such exceptional poetry, talented lady;
I do believe you've touched on something quite
beautiful here. So very, profound, Crim, you leave
me speachless...
I do believe you've touched on something quite
beautiful here. So very, profound, Crim, you leave
me speachless...
Anonymous
5th Mar 2017 5:56pm
Very beautiful Crimsin. It sounds like you are on a learning curve journey
by letting things in like never before. The picture is complimenting, to
showing your compacity and endurance. Lovely pretty lady
by letting things in like never before. The picture is complimenting, to
showing your compacity and endurance. Lovely pretty lady
5th Mar 2017 9:02pm
What we see is a matter of choice. "Some of us are looking at the stars" and you're one of them, Crim. I love the grandeur of this. "Dark, light, they each have their place" and we're all somewhere in between. A wise and eloquent write.
6th Mar 2017 2:21am
the ultimate trip, Crim,
a place where the moon makes poems
& the stars tell them...
a place where the moon makes poems
& the stars tell them...
6th Mar 2017 10:06am
the universal truth is i really enjoyed reading this.
great pen hmmmm i can still hear it in the back of my ear
great pen hmmmm i can still hear it in the back of my ear
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10th Mar 2017 1:34am
To think I almost missed this one...
This is such a profound and awe-inspiring piece, dear Crim
Thank you for sharing this gem of a poem!
Love, Duende
This is such a profound and awe-inspiring piece, dear Crim
Thank you for sharing this gem of a poem!
Love, Duende
