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Tough
life isnt always fluffies and flowers
sometimes its tough
when you see the general population
buzzing about
which ones are strong enough?
what is making them smile
whats tearing them down
In the end,
which ones will be tough enough
to stand tall?
sometimes its tough
when you see the general population
buzzing about
which ones are strong enough?
what is making them smile
whats tearing them down
In the end,
which ones will be tough enough
to stand tall?
Published 25th Feb 2017
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Anonymous
25th Feb 2017 7:41pm
Mysterious.. very powerful, and relevant.. i've missed you.. love..
Dave
Dave
26th Feb 2017 2:18am
25th Feb 2017 8:09pm
26th Feb 2017 2:18am
26th Feb 2017 10:23am
A most observant verse A! The trouble with toughness is that the more you have, the less tenderness there is remaining. If only we could find the balance without the misperception of weakness...
JJ
JJ
27th Feb 2017 2:21am
28th Feb 2017 7:41pm
damn good question - I have no legs but I can still stand up, therefore it is all in our mind - I wish everyone was able to stand up - I know lots of people with legs who just cant stand up - kinda sad :-(
excellent thought provoking piece :-)
excellent thought provoking piece :-)
28th Feb 2017 10:59pm
