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Luver's Wave
looking out over the ocean
I feel a gentle breeze
touching my skin so softly
soft as a velvet rose petal
rubbed across my curves
sound of ocean waves
memorizing my senses
hearing your voice
whispering sweet words
of luv to my soul
our spirits hum in
harmony to natures
beautiful chorus
synchronizing heart beats
felt across the waves
how beautiful the sun
shines upon crystal waters
that carries our luv
from one side of the ocean
straight to the others heart
so my sweet peach
we're never far apart
when words are silenced
our luv is unbreakable
always feeling you
Inspiration ~ "Breeze" by "Bee"
I feel a gentle breeze
touching my skin so softly
soft as a velvet rose petal
rubbed across my curves
sound of ocean waves
memorizing my senses
hearing your voice
whispering sweet words
of luv to my soul
our spirits hum in
harmony to natures
beautiful chorus
synchronizing heart beats
felt across the waves
how beautiful the sun
shines upon crystal waters
that carries our luv
from one side of the ocean
straight to the others heart
so my sweet peach
we're never far apart
when words are silenced
our luv is unbreakable
always feeling you
Inspiration ~ "Breeze" by "Bee"
Published 20th Feb 2017
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20th Feb 2017 4:13am
20th Feb 2017 4:15am
Hey Kavik......thank you my friend.......good to see you....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
20th Feb 2017 4:31am
Such a beautiful piece. Love radiates off of every word.
Lovely ink, sweet flower 💜
Lovely ink, sweet flower 💜
22nd Feb 2017 2:02am
Hey Deeply......thank you for always smiling upon my ink.......happy you can feel the luv......purple luv & hugs xo :)
20th Feb 2017 9:23am
22nd Feb 2017 2:04am
Hey Poet.......you humble me with your words.......so thrilled you enjoyed this......thank you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
20th Feb 2017 1:39pm
What an exquisite, lovely, and deep meaning of love. It doesn't get any better than this,
22nd Feb 2017 2:10am
Hey Jerry.......you're so right."it doesn't get any better than this".......I'm very fortunate to have been touched by such a luv.......thank you for the smile......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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22nd Feb 2017 2:12am
Awe Lily......you're always a blessing to me......thank you for your blessings to us.......purple luv & honey kisses from us both xo :)
20th Feb 2017 3:00pm
An exquisite photo sets the tone for this tenderness, Purply'one. The ocean has a way of unlocking the secret feelings of the heart into a lover's verse.
22nd Feb 2017 2:30am
Hey Ahavati.........the pic I'm blessed to have found......your words are always so insightful and graceful.......you're truly a gentle soul that feels inside of others......thank you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
20th Feb 2017 3:25pm
Lovely petal, this sparkles like the sunlight on the water you've painted. So beautiful, sweet one :)
Willow
Willow
22nd Feb 2017 2:35am
Hey Willow....always a blessing to see your smile upon my ink......you make my page shine more.......thank you my friend......glad you enjoyed....purple luv & hugs xo :)
20th Feb 2017 4:34pm
22nd Feb 2017 2:37am
Hey Again....thank you for your praise.......glad you enjoyed this.....was easy to write and feel......purple luv & hugs xo :)
22nd Feb 2017 4:59am
Thank you Again......yes I do read you......usually offline........I'm behind in my own comments right now......will visit you when I get caught up.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
15th Aug 2017 9:08pm
20th Feb 2017 7:27pm
I love your way with nature, Flower. The ocean's perfect to capture your beauty and free spirit. And Bee seems to be the ideal muse to inspire such work. This is a sweet and refreshing way to start the day. Thank you Flower!
22nd Feb 2017 2:48am
Hey Crow...always a delight to see your smile........nature is a beautiful inspiration.......mix that with words of luv and it's amazing.......Bee is awesome in my life......a wonderful soul.......thank you for your heart felt words.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
21st Feb 2017 00:05am
Oh, my Beautiful Flower ...
such an "inspiration" indeed
from one oceanic heart to another.
Though a distance it may seem ...
it just seems ... always a great honor
to read you. Love to you, my Friend.
~Devlin
22nd Feb 2017 2:54am
Awe Dev.....your comment brought a tear.....yes we are an ocean away.....yet never far apart.......Bee inspires my heart very much......thank you my sacred friend.....purple luv & hugs sent your way xo :)
21st Feb 2017 1:00am
22nd Feb 2017 2:56am
Hey Daniel......always appreciate your kindness......I'm glad you felt the soft breeze.......thank you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
21st Feb 2017 2:57pm
when I first read the title I thought of wave as a hand gesture - imagine my surprise - beautifully descriptive and romantic - like much :-)
22nd Feb 2017 3:29am
Hey David.......LMAO!! You made me so laugh......thirlled you liked the surprise.......you made my night.....thank you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
22nd Feb 2017 4:31am
25th Feb 2017 2:42am
Awe X......this heart is very much full of luv.......it comes from being luved for just who I am........thank you for your precious words.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
22nd Feb 2017 4:33am
beautiful Flower I can feel the breeze of the ocean caress my skin in this oh so beautiful love poem..
love Crim
love Crim
25th Feb 2017 2:56am
Awe beautiful Crim.........precious to see your smile upon my ink once again.......I'm thrilled you felt this.......you've made me smile......purple luv & hugs xo :)
6th Mar 2017 8:06am
"our spirits hum in
harmony to natures
beautiful chorus
synchronizing heart beats
felt across the waves" ..... my favorite part. Love becomes love when it is free. Time and space hold no boundaries when we learn to love like this. Thank you.
harmony to natures
beautiful chorus
synchronizing heart beats
felt across the waves" ..... my favorite part. Love becomes love when it is free. Time and space hold no boundaries when we learn to love like this. Thank you.
7th Mar 2017 2:50am
Welcome to DU Miz!! Thank you for smiling upon my ink and visiting my page....touched by your words....it's a wonderful to feel luv so much.......appreciate you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
