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Death by bullet
His apathy is a killer
A shot gun physcological thriller
Click, click BOOM, now he’s a death dealer
He pulled the trigger, now she is gone, y'all feel her?
A shot gun physcological thriller
Click, click BOOM, now he’s a death dealer
He pulled the trigger, now she is gone, y'all feel her?
Published 15th Feb 2017
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15th Feb 2017 5:44pm
y'all?! That's a deep south term.
All I could think of reading this is Nancy Sinatra's "Bang Bang", which then led my thought process to "Pulp Fiction"...
I'll leave it at that.
It's interesting you'd end with a question about "feeling" after an apathetic opening and subsequent murder.
Okay, so I guess I did think a bit more than a song and/or movie...
All I could think of reading this is Nancy Sinatra's "Bang Bang", which then led my thought process to "Pulp Fiction"...
I'll leave it at that.
It's interesting you'd end with a question about "feeling" after an apathetic opening and subsequent murder.
Okay, so I guess I did think a bit more than a song and/or movie...
15th Feb 2017 6:18pm
I am dying I am currently working on a poem referencing samuel jackson's character in pulp fiction!! Your good.
15th Feb 2017 6:53pm
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28th Aug 2017 9:36pm
Excellent.
16th Jan 2019 6:47am
