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Speak Your Truth
She has a hard time
finding her voice,
her parents didn't
allow it
She struggles with this
everyday, surrounded by
judgemental people in her life,
their questions, more like accusations
it takes a lot
for her to open up
to anyone, she finds herself
alone, a lot
That can be really hard sometimes,
she longs for things,
but doesn't really know what
they are
Every day she has to
remind herself,
she made it this far ...
Be Brave
finding her voice,
her parents didn't
allow it
She struggles with this
everyday, surrounded by
judgemental people in her life,
their questions, more like accusations
it takes a lot
for her to open up
to anyone, she finds herself
alone, a lot
That can be really hard sometimes,
she longs for things,
but doesn't really know what
they are
Every day she has to
remind herself,
she made it this far ...
Be Brave
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Re. Speak Your Truth
6th Feb 2017 6:42pm
Re: Re. Speak Your Truth
8th Feb 2017 10:45pm
Thank You Jus_Tim for the read and thoughtful comments. She has always followed the beat of her own drum .. no stopping now
Re. Speak Your Truth
7th Feb 2017 00:58am
Indeed, Je. I believe we choose the waters we're in. When you're too tired to swim, dog paddle. And when you're too tired to dog paddle, float.
Hang tough. You're brave.
Hang tough. You're brave.
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Re: Re. Speak Your Truth
8th Feb 2017 10:46pm
Awww Thank You Ahavati .. You are such a sweetheart. Thank You for such beautiful comments, greatly appreciated ox
Re. Speak Your Truth
Anonymous
7th Feb 2017 6:12am
This one hits close to home.
I love your message.
Lovely vulnerable write.
I love your message.
Lovely vulnerable write.
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Re: Re. Speak Your Truth
8th Feb 2017 10:47pm
Re. Speak Your Truth
7th Feb 2017 2:05pm
In my head I changed all the pronouns to he and his, then it made perfect sense, to me :-)
I really connected with this poem, thank you :-)
I really connected with this poem, thank you :-)
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Re: Re. Speak Your Truth
8th Feb 2017 10:49pm
Thank You so much David ... I believe that is the highest compliment one could give ..
Re. Speak Your Truth
7th Feb 2017 11:01pm
..it is that thing we all search for....love acceptance & understanding....I liked this
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Re: Re. Speak Your Truth
8th Feb 2017 10:50pm
So true SatanSperm ... three very important things ! Thank you for the read and thoughtful comments .. much appreciated
Re. Speak Your Truth
12th Feb 2017 7:32am
This one really hit home... it was like reading myself...
"Be Brave" > I can't think of a better ending...
Thank you so much for sharing!
"Be Brave" > I can't think of a better ending...
Thank you so much for sharing!
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Re: Re. Speak Your Truth
17th Feb 2017 1:10am
Thank you so much Duende for the read and thoughtful comments ... And for the add to your RL , humbled and honored by the gesture
Re. Speak Your Truth
2nd Mar 2017 9:28pm