deepundergroundpoetry.com
Tangerines
I took a pill,
And ate a few Tangerine's,
A few yellow,
And one green,
Now I'm laughing,
At this damn Machine,
Because he reminds me,
Of one of those Tangerines,
I took a few more pills,
And I'm lucky I'm not ill,
I ate a few Tangerine's,
One blue,
And one green,
This time,
I ate a tangerine,
But inside,
It wasn't what It seemed to be,
inside that very tangerine,
Was a few more,
Both yellow and Green.
And ate a few Tangerine's,
A few yellow,
And one green,
Now I'm laughing,
At this damn Machine,
Because he reminds me,
Of one of those Tangerines,
I took a few more pills,
And I'm lucky I'm not ill,
I ate a few Tangerine's,
One blue,
And one green,
This time,
I ate a tangerine,
But inside,
It wasn't what It seemed to be,
inside that very tangerine,
Was a few more,
Both yellow and Green.
Published 22nd Jan 2017
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 2
reading list entries 1
comments 2
reads 827
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
22nd Jan 2017 4:22am
this is fucking fantastic! i do not know if my interpretation of it was what you intended, but i enjoyed it all the same. the word play/rhyming, the development, the conciseness, the bit of mystery.. all very well done. respect!
22nd Jan 2017 7:02am
This is an fantastic piece of poetry, you're talent shown through brilliantly. Love the flow and emotions of it.
~anonshadow😏
~anonshadow😏
