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You Gotta Know...
Like a song...
I know we are here
In our 'life's station'
N times bein' what they are
makes it hard to change
our present situation
But... You gotta know
I wanna see you grow
Into this 'masterpiece'
of a woman;
To be all you can...
One with success
n' happiness... in tune
with your 'womaness'
Flyin' high on the wings
of dreams, makin' it
with your light 'music'
I already hear the joy
you'd bring...
You gotta know...
No matter how far we go
or whether we fall...
why, you're easily
one of the best songs
I've heard of all...
I know we are here
In our 'life's station'
N times bein' what they are
makes it hard to change
our present situation
But... You gotta know
I wanna see you grow
Into this 'masterpiece'
of a woman;
To be all you can...
One with success
n' happiness... in tune
with your 'womaness'
Flyin' high on the wings
of dreams, makin' it
with your light 'music'
I already hear the joy
you'd bring...
You gotta know...
No matter how far we go
or whether we fall...
why, you're easily
one of the best songs
I've heard of all...
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Re. You Gotta Know...
20th Jan 2017 1:56am
I loved this piece so much baby,
It was so beautiful.
It's definitely one of my favorites. ❤️😊
It was so beautiful.
It's definitely one of my favorites. ❤️😊
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20th Jan 2017 2:06am
*bashfully kickin rocks* Well gosh n golly... Thank ya ma'am... I do believe u made me blush! lol Ur welcome my sweetie pie in my eye! lol... Honored u did n added it too :)
Re. You Gotta Know...
20th Jan 2017 2:12am
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20th Jan 2017 2:17am
Re. You Gotta Know...
Beautifully done love. But hey that's nothing new. 😆 Much love sweetheart. 💋
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20th Jan 2017 2:50am
Aaaawww... Ur so wonderful my sweet lady, muah! Deeply grateful for the honor n the RL add :)
Re. You Gotta Know...
20th Jan 2017 4:25am
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20th Jan 2017 8:09am
Thank you sweetness, I'm grateful for your time n thoughts on my ink... appreciate it much :)
Re. You Gotta Know...
20th Jan 2017 7:35am
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20th Jan 2017 8:48am
Thank you so much Kasai, I'm so happy you liked n appreciate your continued support :)
Re. You Gotta Know...
20th Jan 2017 8:14am
Breathtakingly beautiful... I'm kinda lost for words, so I'll leave it at that...
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20th Jan 2017 11:15am
You said plenty my dear, so I gratefully thank you, n I'm honored by the RL add :)
Re. You Gotta Know...
20th Jan 2017 10:22am
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20th Jan 2017 11:50pm
Hey lady, been awhile... it's nice serious g visit from you again. :) truly grateful for it :)
Re. You Gotta Know...
20th Jan 2017 12:22pm
I don't know who you intended this for, but I read it and imagine saying it to a daughter. It's a gorgeous piece, my friend :)
Willow
Willow
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Re: Re. You Gotta Know...
20th Jan 2017 11:56pm
Happy you found it gorgeous willow n I'm honored by your words n support :)
Re. You Gotta Know...
20th Jan 2017 1:23pm
I know how ya feel man. Damn think we got it, bad bro,
haha, yes sir!
Will
haha, yes sir!
Will
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Re: Re. You Gotta Know...
21st Jan 2017 9:51am
Lol indeed we do bro! Thanks so much for always lending your support, it's greatly appreciated :)
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19th Nov 2021 10:45pm
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Jun 2019 1:47pm
20th Jan 2017 3:03pm
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21st Jan 2017 9:52am
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20th Jan 2017 9:04pm
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21st Jan 2017 9:55am
That is true, of course it means I'm oft times heartbroken but hey, What can you do? lol anywho I thank you much sweet Crim u rock! :)
Re. You Gotta Know...
21st Jan 2017 8:50am
Yeah really like this grudging love as if it's as much of an admission to the beholder as to the beholden
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21st Jan 2017 9:57am
N you would be correct my astute brethren! :) n I thank you very much for the support :)
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22nd Jan 2017 3:20am
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22nd Jan 2017 3:42am
Aaaawwww... Sweetest Rain, I heart this comment! :) thank you so much I'm Deeply grateful :)
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22nd Jan 2017 11:02pm
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24th Jan 2017 4:16am
Great diction. Love your words and how beautifully they flow. Amazing work.
Faith
Faith
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24th Jan 2017 10:41am
Gosh, haven't had anyone compliment me using diction since school daze! lol thank you, that was very sweet of you n I truly appreciate your time n thoughts on this ink :)
Re. You Gotta Know...
1st Feb 2017 11:01pm
Gosh damn it, this is beautiful
.. I am loving the inspirational
encouragement here
some women do not receive this
everday, but my lawd, I feel
as if I can go 10 more thousand
miles.. . and that's just from
reading this AS A WOMAN.
Ow!
-Howlings
.. I am loving the inspirational
encouragement here
some women do not receive this
everday, but my lawd, I feel
as if I can go 10 more thousand
miles.. . and that's just from
reading this AS A WOMAN.
Ow!
-Howlings
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1st Feb 2017 11:49pm
Aaaaawww... my sweetheart... thank you for such a wonderful comment! Truly appreciate it...always :)
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3rd Feb 2017 00:23am
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Sep 2020 1:45am
16th Feb 2017 12:45pm
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16th Feb 2017 1:29pm
I'm deeply grateful for your words n your time spent on my page...appreciate it much :)
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8th Mar 2017 2:44pm
Ooooohhhh - just beautiful. My name means "like a song" so I was immediately captivated by the first line!
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8th Mar 2017 4:28pm
Wow... really? You must have a beautiful name then... thank you for this very sweet comment... truly grateful for it... :)
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8th Dec 2017 1:21am
Absolutely breath taking poem. I mean it. It was so simple yet beautiful nonetheless. Made me smile :)
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8th Dec 2017 1:31am
Well I'm a simple guy, it goes that I'd be inclined to write simple lol...thank u my dear, I'm flattered big time, n appreciate u...I mean it! :)