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Twinkle, Twinkle
Twinkle twinkle, guns and bombs;
Israeli sends out its shaloms;
Gaza's Children meet their fate,
Victims of Israeli hate.
See the arid desert bloom!
Gaze at Gaza, now a tomb!
Watch the starshells in the sky!
Listen to the children die!
Twinkle, twinkle, Gaza's slums;
Israel's lies and booming guns;
Orphaned children, today's tears;
Hamas' martyrs - future years.
Palestine, don't give up hope
Although you're just a TV soap;
Israel may win the bloody field
But a second holocaust is sealed.
Israeli sends out its shaloms;
Gaza's Children meet their fate,
Victims of Israeli hate.
See the arid desert bloom!
Gaze at Gaza, now a tomb!
Watch the starshells in the sky!
Listen to the children die!
Twinkle, twinkle, Gaza's slums;
Israel's lies and booming guns;
Orphaned children, today's tears;
Hamas' martyrs - future years.
Palestine, don't give up hope
Although you're just a TV soap;
Israel may win the bloody field
But a second holocaust is sealed.
Published 11th Aug 2011
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11th Aug 2011 6:32pm
thanks,
this caught my eye on the thread. it's a great poem to read and a good idea to use the 'twinkle twinkle' form that you did.
fair play natasha!
this caught my eye on the thread. it's a great poem to read and a good idea to use the 'twinkle twinkle' form that you did.
fair play natasha!
11th Aug 2011 6:41pm
Thank you. I got the idea when I was on the Internet, and saw an add for the military, then on another website ads for children and the crisises.
11th Aug 2011 9:40pm
12th Aug 2011 5:21am
I know. And sometimes there are things that need to be said, but some are just not willing to bring the issue up.
13th Aug 2011 8:51am
It takes guts to talk about an issue that no body seems to care about any more. Thanks for having the strength. We shouldn't forget the atrocity that are occuring just because they are not occurring here.
13th Aug 2011 11:11am
After keeping up w/ this stuff for a while one begins to lose hope about peace in the middle east... A good poem making a twisted lullaby of a crisis
22nd Feb 2012 6:19am
cool setting! nice go at the flow! very dark humor using nursery rhyme lingo with War-zone vindication! first part reached but i journeyed thru n enjoyed the rest!
