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i refuse
i refuse to praise gore
i refuse to vent rage
i refuse to be a foe
regardless of the age
the age of discontent
the age of disrespect
i defy the defiling defiants
the complying non-compliants!
neither new nor old
not bein' 'kool' nor bold
stating the blatant obvious
the way it should be told
KDAmB 2017. All rights reserved.
i refuse to vent rage
i refuse to be a foe
regardless of the age
the age of discontent
the age of disrespect
i defy the defiling defiants
the complying non-compliants!
neither new nor old
not bein' 'kool' nor bold
stating the blatant obvious
the way it should be told
KDAmB 2017. All rights reserved.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. i refuse
4th Jan 2017 12:58pm
I very much enjoyed this one. It speaks of an elegance and dignity that seems to be distinctly lacking in today's society. Defiance need not be screaming and shooting at each other. And being true to self is always the best route. Good words these :)
Willow
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Re: Re. i refuse
5th Jan 2017 8:30pm
Willows, my friend! your're too kind and generous in your praise. Humbled I am.
"Defiance need not be screaming and shooting at each other. And being true to self is always the best route. Good words these :) "
you embody this perfectly my friend. My observation so far here both from your words and actions.
Thank You So much Willows for your friendship and support!
regards
KDAmB
"Defiance need not be screaming and shooting at each other. And being true to self is always the best route. Good words these :) "
you embody this perfectly my friend. My observation so far here both from your words and actions.
Thank You So much Willows for your friendship and support!
regards
KDAmB
Re. i refuse
Anonymous
4th Jan 2017 1:04pm
I really like is poem it speaks to me
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Re: Re. i refuse
5th Jan 2017 8:32pm
Welcome and Thank You my dear friend! Glad I am you liked this and it made some meaning. Appreciate your visit and kind words bro!
Cheers!
KDAmB
Cheers!
KDAmB
Re. i refuse
Anonymous
4th Jan 2017 2:56pm
It was nice to read a strong, positive outlook this morning. :-)
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Re: Re. i refuse
5th Jan 2017 8:34pm
Welcome dear Friend!
Glad I am you saw some meaning in this scribble. I cannot appreciate enough your help and kind gesture. Thank You for answering my preference for honest critique!
warm regards
KDAmB
Glad I am you saw some meaning in this scribble. I cannot appreciate enough your help and kind gesture. Thank You for answering my preference for honest critique!
warm regards
KDAmB
Re. i refuse
4th Jan 2017 3:32pm
Re: Re. i refuse
Welcome Sage one!
Thank You so much for the kind and encouraging appreciation. Well, tried to scribble my frustration in easy to read jumbling of words... glad it fell like nursery rhymes..just love them. Am actually going through my second childhood with my 4 and half yr old keeping the poetic works going at home!
kind regards
KDAmB
Thank You so much for the kind and encouraging appreciation. Well, tried to scribble my frustration in easy to read jumbling of words... glad it fell like nursery rhymes..just love them. Am actually going through my second childhood with my 4 and half yr old keeping the poetic works going at home!
kind regards
KDAmB
Re. i refuse
Anonymous
4th Jan 2017 5:21pm
Strong, and powerful.
I love the strength which is highly reflected in your words.
Nicely done, sweet friend 💓
I love the strength which is highly reflected in your words.
Nicely done, sweet friend 💓
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Re: Re. i refuse
5th Jan 2017 8:40pm
Welcome MsHeart!
who else to see strength in the weak than the Lady heart herself. You are very kind and generous in your appreciation my friend. Thank You for the kind gesture my friend!
warm regards
KDAmB
who else to see strength in the weak than the Lady heart herself. You are very kind and generous in your appreciation my friend. Thank You for the kind gesture my friend!
warm regards
KDAmB
Re. i refuse
5th Jan 2017 6:04am
Re: Re. i refuse
5th Jan 2017 8:51pm
Welcome my Brother Anon!
what better a compliment from a mate than to hear they get the meaning from the scribble. I appreciate immensely your unwavering kindness and support my brother! Thank You!
Cheers!
KDAmB
what better a compliment from a mate than to hear they get the meaning from the scribble. I appreciate immensely your unwavering kindness and support my brother! Thank You!
Cheers!
KDAmB
Re: Re. i refuse
5th Jan 2017 8:54pm
Welcome my Brother!
Your continious support and kind appreciation of my works has always been dear to me.
Thank You brother Cheesa!
regards
KDAmB
Your continious support and kind appreciation of my works has always been dear to me.
Thank You brother Cheesa!
regards
KDAmB
Re: Re. i refuse
6th Jan 2017 8:09am
Re: Re. i refuse
6th Jan 2017 8:26am
Mate I'd be a liar if I said I wasn't inspired by your works and not motivated by your support!!
Re. i refuse
6th Jan 2017 7:34am
Re: Re. i refuse
6th Jan 2017 7:39am
Welcome dear friend!
I thank you for your visit and kind appreciation. Glad the scribble made some sense. Thank you once again
Kind regards
KDAmB
I thank you for your visit and kind appreciation. Glad the scribble made some sense. Thank you once again
Kind regards
KDAmB
Re. i refuse
6th Jan 2017 5:49pm
this good and fascinating work and I can easily understand how somebody could reach these conclusions:
"i refuse to vent rage
i refuse to be a foe
regardless of the age"
It is those very things that keep me alive and kicking - I would be nothing without rage - It's funny how we all differ yet still can be friends - that's the additional thing that keeps me going :-)
"i refuse to vent rage
i refuse to be a foe
regardless of the age"
It is those very things that keep me alive and kicking - I would be nothing without rage - It's funny how we all differ yet still can be friends - that's the additional thing that keeps me going :-)
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Re: Re. i refuse
7th Jan 2017 5:17am
Welcome Dear Dave!
:-) :-)
the reason I am here, too, you have summed up very well. Yes we all differ on so many levels and aspects, subjects and more yet we still get along as friends. Amazing yet true.
David, you Sir are an exception to the rule and justifiably so every bit. I admire your works and You Dave and the reasons are obvious.
I deeply appreciate how you spread smiles,laughter and bring us to tears with your versatile ink. Any feedback/appreciation from you means more than words can express. Thank You Dave! Happy New Year once again!!
KDAmB
:-) :-)
the reason I am here, too, you have summed up very well. Yes we all differ on so many levels and aspects, subjects and more yet we still get along as friends. Amazing yet true.
David, you Sir are an exception to the rule and justifiably so every bit. I admire your works and You Dave and the reasons are obvious.
I deeply appreciate how you spread smiles,laughter and bring us to tears with your versatile ink. Any feedback/appreciation from you means more than words can express. Thank You Dave! Happy New Year once again!!
KDAmB
Re: Re. i refuse
9th Jan 2017 12:45pm
Re. i refuse
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Jan 2017 4:20am
29th Jan 2017 4:18am
BRAVO!!!! Absolutely right KD......straight forward the way it should be......I'm never who I am not.......enjoyed this.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. i refuse
29th Jan 2017 4:37am
Welcome dear friend Flower Girl! Appreciate sincerely your visit and deep insight as well as your compliment. Thank you once again for gracing my page with your purple aura. Kind regards KDAmB ☺