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Hark Lucifer's Song
for my darkness
you do not hearken
Lucifer veiled
bringer of false light
in which you shelter
do you find yourself shiver
in it's cold warmth?
as it enshrouds your soul
injected with the most vile
I the defiler of faith
bless me this day
with blasphemous
cankerous clouds
cyanide flavored rain
as I eat and tear into naked flesh
writhe in my presence
"slave to your knees!"
legion has it's vices
they must be fed
sweet meat for the beast
porno, alcohol, trash t.v.
"feed me, feed me!"
deny your King?
on this blackened day
you will remember
I am the harbinger of desolation
caster of the darkest magic
for the masses
legion has it's vices
they must be fed
sweet meat for the beast
porno, alcohol, trash t.v.
"feed me, feed me!"
in this dark hour
I feel no relief
seek sanctuary in the grave
may death bring me peace
while into Hades I descend
for being ashes from within
hear now Lucifer sing
as I eat and tear into naked flesh
writhe in my presence
"slave to your knees!"
Published 22nd Dec 2016
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"I am the harbinger of desolation
caster of the darkest magic
just for the masses"
Truer statements have never been told.
It is a world-wide porno, etc. show. Let
it be. Have to admit to belonging to the
"masses," Lucifer talks about. Better that
in my estimation than belonging to the strict
moral code of various religions. True,
religion does tend to construct a pleasing,
to many, a rigid social order, which gives us
calm streets, and outward thoughts. Bah!
We of the free thinkers of the world will scorn
the forced believers of God and all that word
means. We will evolve into a more calm world,
but when we do it will be because we WANT it,
not because it is forced upon us!
Okay. Little rant there . . .
caster of the darkest magic
just for the masses"
Truer statements have never been told.
It is a world-wide porno, etc. show. Let
it be. Have to admit to belonging to the
"masses," Lucifer talks about. Better that
in my estimation than belonging to the strict
moral code of various religions. True,
religion does tend to construct a pleasing,
to many, a rigid social order, which gives us
calm streets, and outward thoughts. Bah!
We of the free thinkers of the world will scorn
the forced believers of God and all that word
means. We will evolve into a more calm world,
but when we do it will be because we WANT it,
not because it is forced upon us!
Okay. Little rant there . . .
23rd Dec 2016 2:20am
thank you Jerry i'm one of the porn loving masses ;) I don't follow any religion myself.. so I understand you there.. you are an free thinking individual with a lot of wisdom.. loved your rant :)
xo Brenda
xo Brenda
22nd Dec 2016 8:01pm
This could be the highlight of an opera, but not of the Andrew Lloyd Webber variety. You could do this as an aria:
in this dark hour
I feel no relief
seek sanctuary in the grave
may death bring me peace
while into Hades I descend
for being ashes from within
And the lesser devils could offer support on the choruses:
legion has it's vices
they must be fed
sweet meat for the beast
porno, alcohol, trash t.v.
"feed me, feed me!"
This is beautiful even if it never makes it to the Philharmonic. I'll hark your song any day Crim....
in this dark hour
I feel no relief
seek sanctuary in the grave
may death bring me peace
while into Hades I descend
for being ashes from within
And the lesser devils could offer support on the choruses:
legion has it's vices
they must be fed
sweet meat for the beast
porno, alcohol, trash t.v.
"feed me, feed me!"
This is beautiful even if it never makes it to the Philharmonic. I'll hark your song any day Crim....
23rd Dec 2016 2:21am
I love the idea of this being an opera it is indeed Lucifer singing to me.. thank you Sir Crow..
love Crim
love Crim
Anonymous
22nd Dec 2016 8:50pm
My Beautiful Brenda....you have brought elegance and delicate to this write when one would think impossible...a masterfully written piece....
"I the defiler of faith
bless me this day
with blasphemous
cankerous clouds
cyanide flavored rain"
~ These lines I just loved as I love you!
xoxo Taryn
"I the defiler of faith
bless me this day
with blasphemous
cankerous clouds
cyanide flavored rain"
~ These lines I just loved as I love you!
xoxo Taryn
23rd Dec 2016 2:22am
thank you my beautiful one for seeing the beauty among the darkness :)
I love you so much..
xo Brenda
I love you so much..
xo Brenda
Anonymous
22nd Dec 2016 9:29pm
Lucifer would be so proud.
Sorry, my Queen, but I am *speechless*.
Love to you ...~Devlin
23rd Dec 2016 2:23am
I have no idea how you weave such intricately beautiful dark expressions. I don't even know what to say to this except...gorgeous...dark...honest...naked...perfect.
Willow
Willow
23rd Dec 2016 2:25am
thank you lovely Willow you made me smile with your beautiful comment on this dark write :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
22nd Dec 2016 9:48pm
Devilin is right, I am proud!! What a beautifully evil piece of ink here!
I approve
-Lucifer
I approve
-Lucifer
23rd Dec 2016 2:26am
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23rd Dec 2016 2:12am
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23rd Dec 2016 4:49am
Brenda.. you are creating a lyrical beauty, needing music.. your heart is bleeding in every word.. love you!!
Dave
Dave
28th Dec 2016 9:22am
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28th Dec 2016 9:23am
23rd Dec 2016 7:55pm
Embracing the darkest thoughts only contrasts the light when it shines. This is what I love about you the most; you're willing to open and share the journey with us.
28th Dec 2016 9:24am
thank you Sage one for the love you've shown me and for journeying into the dark with me..
love Brenda
love Brenda
24th Dec 2016 11:27am
it's a stark gathering of sin with no atonement, Crim;
a stage surrounded by a ring of fire...
a stage surrounded by a ring of fire...
28th Dec 2016 9:24am
