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Hopes
bathed by moonlight
in joy they sing
for tomorrow to bring
all life's delight
together in love
they come together
to nurture their hope, the child
growing inside her
against the shadow
of the goddess' form
they offer prayers
for their healing
their hope
is the rope
to their success
a line to their tomorrows.
*this poem was entered in a competition here. thank you for reading*
Published 22nd Dec 2016
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22nd Dec 2016 8:16pm
Thank you Grace. I needed some lines of optimism this morning. This is spiritual, sweetly emotional and a joy to read. Here's hoping you win the comp!
22nd Dec 2016 11:33pm
23rd Dec 2016 00:51am
it is simple thoughtful poetry, the second verse has a gentle turn, very well written, greetings, grace. :)
23rd Dec 2016 2:09am
23rd Dec 2016 2:20am
Hi Grace, oh I a so much better than 2 years ago. :) Thank you for asking. :)
26th Dec 2016 00:03am
