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Mortality
Time
How much lies ahead?
Much less than has passed
Since my entry to this stream
Where my spirit slowly drowns
In fear of the end of my mortal shell
Do I have an everlasting soul?
Or will there be nothing left of me?
The end of my poetic endeavor?
I know I cannot be zoetic forever
Immortal is impossible but life was improbable
Before opening the portal of the mortal world
So I will leave my artistic remnants behind
For the future to dig up and possibly remind
Unborn poets that will keep my verse breathing
Long after my last warm breath is exhaled
Finger painted secretly In icy condensation
Engraved in the fabric of elastic memory
Where poetry may be fossilized for eternity
How much lies ahead?
Much less than has passed
Since my entry to this stream
Where my spirit slowly drowns
In fear of the end of my mortal shell
Do I have an everlasting soul?
Or will there be nothing left of me?
The end of my poetic endeavor?
I know I cannot be zoetic forever
Immortal is impossible but life was improbable
Before opening the portal of the mortal world
So I will leave my artistic remnants behind
For the future to dig up and possibly remind
Unborn poets that will keep my verse breathing
Long after my last warm breath is exhaled
Finger painted secretly In icy condensation
Engraved in the fabric of elastic memory
Where poetry may be fossilized for eternity
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Re. Mortality
8th Dec 2016 7:45am
There will always be poetry, even after we are gone, just as there was before us.
Thanks for a great read...
Thanks for a great read...
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Anonymous
8th Dec 2016 9:30am
Your poems are embedded in my soul forever jj!
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Re. Mortality
8th Dec 2016 11:23am
Sometimes I wonder too, Poetryman. Much as we are, will we amount to something afterwards?
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Anonymous
8th Dec 2016 12:06pm
Ours is not to wonder why.. I love that saying. You'll always be here .. even when your gone. You have written so much beauty. It would be impossible to forget a master as you..
💞Peace JJ
🦉🖋📝Trish
💞Peace JJ
🦉🖋📝Trish
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8th Dec 2016 9:04pm
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Anonymous
9th Dec 2016 6:19am
Oh stop it JJ,lol. My hell take a complement. Grandiose style with your comment of appreciation.
✨Trish
✨Trish
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Anonymous
10th Dec 2016 1:39am
Hey JJ.......one day all of our poetic ness will end.....but one thing I know......is poets like you will forever remain alive in the hearts of souls you've touched thru out the years of you being here.......the impact of you being here will never be known by you but by others who's lives you've chnaged with your amazing words.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re. Mortality
10th Dec 2016 8:01am
Thought provoking words linger in the minds of readers and listeners long after they are heard. They stir when remembered and are at the tip of the tongue in response many a time throughout life.
Though I am not active here, you know your words have impacted my life and fascinated my mind. Once again, this piece is no different.
Merry Cheers,
Jessica Dawn
Though I am not active here, you know your words have impacted my life and fascinated my mind. Once again, this piece is no different.
Merry Cheers,
Jessica Dawn
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Jess, anytime you bless my poetry with your pale blue eyes, my universe is enlightened and my heart becomes a nova... thank you my dear and lovely friend!
I will wish upon all of tonight's shooting stars that I may have the wish I wish tonight... for your words to grace my world of poetry and for your ink to color my sky...
Sparkling Rainbows
JJ
I will wish upon all of tonight's shooting stars that I may have the wish I wish tonight... for your words to grace my world of poetry and for your ink to color my sky...
Sparkling Rainbows
JJ
Re. MortalityThis is a very well written poem.
13th Dec 2016 00:02am
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12th Oct 2017 12:23pm
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