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TREE
The night silent of traffic
A dust dry silent night
But for the howling anger of a man
A solitary voice
Against the violence of sleeping men
Against the blood drowsy mosquitos
Against a city silent of traffic
Of slums slumbering their stomachs rumbling
And commerce and the street hawkers
Sweaty mission priests and dormitory orphans
Even the imam and the raw red cocks are silent
The police are not disturbed
They do not come to silence him
And tough tired hired girls heel in hand
Tiptoe home exhausted
They too are deaf to his wanton screams
His screams are His wants
And no one cares
Then the first delivery trucks turn
A rusty corner ladened
And he is silenced by the City waking
Minaret calling computer oven firing
The noxious burn of tannery horns and hooves
As the machine of human desire
Once more lurches automatically
In involuntary unison
A solitary city tree
I sink my feet deep in the earth
Let others reach for star and sky
I am made of more humble worth
I give him shade and keep him dry
Bereft he sleeps beneath my bough
A dust dry silent night
But for the howling anger of a man
A solitary voice
Against the violence of sleeping men
Against the blood drowsy mosquitos
Against a city silent of traffic
Of slums slumbering their stomachs rumbling
And commerce and the street hawkers
Sweaty mission priests and dormitory orphans
Even the imam and the raw red cocks are silent
The police are not disturbed
They do not come to silence him
And tough tired hired girls heel in hand
Tiptoe home exhausted
They too are deaf to his wanton screams
His screams are His wants
And no one cares
Then the first delivery trucks turn
A rusty corner ladened
And he is silenced by the City waking
Minaret calling computer oven firing
The noxious burn of tannery horns and hooves
As the machine of human desire
Once more lurches automatically
In involuntary unison
A solitary city tree
I sink my feet deep in the earth
Let others reach for star and sky
I am made of more humble worth
I give him shade and keep him dry
Bereft he sleeps beneath my bough
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Anonymous
8th Dec 2016 12:09pm
Shelter for all.. this is an incredible truth for those in need. Than you Whale.
🐳Trish
🐳Trish
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8th Dec 2016 4:25pm
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8th Dec 2016 2:07pm
it rings out clearly on a silent night;
maybe it's a season of suffering...
maybe it's a season of suffering...
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8th Dec 2016 4:26pm
Aye John they say there's never birth without suffering and its darkest before the dawn ... and we wait
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8th Dec 2016 3:48pm
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8th Dec 2016 4:27pm
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"I hear the voice of one crying..."
A voice lost in the wilderness of modern society, Brother.
Thank goodness for nature...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f4HeIXYqaSs
A voice lost in the wilderness of modern society, Brother.
Thank goodness for nature...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f4HeIXYqaSs
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8th Dec 2016 10:24pm
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Anonymous
8th Dec 2016 10:35pm
There is too much suffering in this age, where it shouldn't be but most turn the blind eye, better pretend not to see than feel guilt and shame.
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9th Dec 2016 9:09pm
thanks Vee we are all connected and in this year of division it is hard to remember that just one soul lost effects us all
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8th Dec 2016 11:04pm
Your writing has such a depth of feeling - strangely passionate and rather well liked in this quarter
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9th Dec 2016 9:11pm
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9th Dec 2016 5:57am
This is such a powerful write. So real. I am going through a period of personal suffering and discovering again how deeply it isolates you. You cry out and there is so little response. Those who do not wish to be disturbed, those who would help, but are not able to or do not know how. I found these lines the most potent.
As the machine of human desire
Once more lurches automatically
In involuntary unison
The business of the living goes on. Everything else gets plowed under. The humble tree offers the strength of its trunk, the shelter of its boughs. Beautiful and poignant.
As the machine of human desire
Once more lurches automatically
In involuntary unison
The business of the living goes on. Everything else gets plowed under. The humble tree offers the strength of its trunk, the shelter of its boughs. Beautiful and poignant.
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9th Dec 2016 9:13pm
Thanks Daniel - this has been the year of the darkest night for many as we stare out to imperceptible horizon searching for light
but light coming is as present as the dark seen
but light coming is as present as the dark seen
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9th Dec 2016 9:43pm
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9th Dec 2016 11:53pm
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12th Dec 2016 4:17am
This poem reminds me of Allen Ginsberg's "Howl" in some respects; the urban and mechanical imagery combined with an intense, searing spirituality, and the evocation of a sprawling city-scape filled with thousands, maybe millions of individual tragedies. Thank you very much for the read.
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12th Dec 2016 8:55am
thanks for this note Jack - this one came out of the night before the dawn
much appreciate the RL as I know you truly care about poetry
much appreciate the RL as I know you truly care about poetry
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21st Dec 2016 4:44am
This here impressed me the same as a poem I read a while back about a bold old woman, a haughty young commander and a star filled flag....
Beautifully written. Enjoyed this whale. Really did
Beautifully written. Enjoyed this whale. Really did
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26th Dec 2016 8:26am
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14th Oct 2017 10:29pm
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Sometimes the machines of human desire
do not think nor pause for long ... . just
lurches and as you so explicitly stated here:
"The noxious burn of tannery horns and hooves
As the machine of human desire
Once more lurches automatically
In involuntary unison "
-Howlings
do not think nor pause for long ... . just
lurches and as you so explicitly stated here:
"The noxious burn of tannery horns and hooves
As the machine of human desire
Once more lurches automatically
In involuntary unison "
-Howlings
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Re. TREE
26th Dec 2016 10:21pm
A tree rather newborn or ripened with age can teach us a lot about life,
especially longevity. Beautiful and astounding.
FS
especially longevity. Beautiful and astounding.
FS
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