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On the Scent
alone at curbside table
slash of tawdry-red lipstick
parted, pouty mouth
sensuous
movie star superiority
coffee vapor tendrils
stroke her face as she sips
sets demitasse down
secretly smiles
as men's eyes fondle her
fedora brim shades her brow
nylons swish
cross of legs
black-leather raincoat
like skin
stands, sniffs air, bitch-like
musky scent
stimulates primitive man
male pheromone
her destiny
©November 20, 2016 / Jerry Pat Bolton
Published 21st Nov 2016
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21st Nov 2016 4:10pm
oh Jerry you write about these luscious ladies you've tasted with a master's eye..
love Brenda :)
love Brenda :)
21st Nov 2016 4:29pm
You put a big ole smile on my face, Brenda. You do know what gives me pleasure, and thank you always for that.--Jerry
21st Nov 2016 4:49pm
You never seize to amaze me Jerry! I love your work! Thanks for the beautiful view! :)
21st Nov 2016 5:23pm
Thank you, thanks you Erotic. And you betcha on that beautiful view. Yep, that's an eyeful, never mind being a pants-full. Heh.Heh
21st Nov 2016 5:57pm
Nice observation,Jerry. I'm certain many men have felt the same way in cafes or pubs. You just happened to write it out.
21st Nov 2016 6:04pm
Oh no Ahavati, I understand that women are an eyeful for men across the globe. It's how it should be and the same holds true when the genders are switched around and it is the woman who is observing a hot looking guy.
Thank you for being here and giving me your perspective, I deeply appreciate it.
Thank you for being here and giving me your perspective, I deeply appreciate it.
21st Nov 2016 6:57pm
I love people watching. Reading this made me smile because you summed up perfectly a moment in time. Like a portrait. You've a gift for peekaboo moments, you do. :)
Willow
Willow
21st Nov 2016 7:35pm
Heh.Heh Yeah, people watching is fun, big time, Willow, and sometimes it pays dividends, and that's a fact, especially if the person you are scoping out is doing the same to you. It has happened to me recently even as old as I am. You just never know.
Thank you dear Willow, for your kind thoughts about my poem.
Thank you dear Willow, for your kind thoughts about my poem.
21st Nov 2016 7:56pm
"It has happened to me recently even as old as I am." I have absolutely no problem believing that! You have a way about you... :)
21st Nov 2016 9:08pm
Could sum up the gorgeous pic and the poem in this rhyme that came to mind:
Oh the cross of legs, the pout...
"Look at me", these seem to shout,
Not forgetting left breast's show
As she leans to bag below,
Her blouse so widely apart
Tempts me to feel for her heart!.
As for its category it is sexually upbeat, it knocks on erotica's door.
Oh the cross of legs, the pout...
"Look at me", these seem to shout,
Not forgetting left breast's show
As she leans to bag below,
Her blouse so widely apart
Tempts me to feel for her heart!.
As for its category it is sexually upbeat, it knocks on erotica's door.
21st Nov 2016 9:06pm
Yeah, you're right, you summed up the photo perfectly, Solomon. And yeah again, it does belong in the erotica's door. Thanks for tha poem and advice,
22nd Nov 2016 5:56am
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21st Nov 2016 10:46pm
I thank you, Sweet, for your very thoughtful comments. Happy you liked my poem.
Anonymous
21st Nov 2016 11:28pm
Jerry, what I love is how you - a l w a y s - take in the tiniest detail...from head to toe and each one in your eyes has beauty and allure in some way...I love how you "see...."
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
22nd Nov 2016 00:52am
And Taryn, I always love how you find the perfect things to comment on my poetry. Thank you.
22nd Nov 2016 2:09am
Wow Jerry.....you brought your pic to life......you've made her such a seductive Lady.......just by her sitting at the table.......perfect......purple luv & hugs xo :)
22nd Nov 2016 3:47am
