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Bring you Back
still outraged by this theft
they took you early
such a sensitive vulnerable soul
they put themselves into you
maybe even before you were born
and now you're chained to their ways
doesn't matter though
I will bring you back
may take many passages of time
but I will try
won't desert you
I will bring you back
where you belong
they took you early
such a sensitive vulnerable soul
they put themselves into you
maybe even before you were born
and now you're chained to their ways
doesn't matter though
I will bring you back
may take many passages of time
but I will try
won't desert you
I will bring you back
where you belong
Published 4th Aug 2011
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4th Aug 2011 11:12pm
4th Aug 2011 11:14pm
Glad you enjoyed it. It has a determined ring to it doesn't it? Thanks for the comment.
8th Aug 2011 1:12am
Earlier reference was to the buffalo soldier; hits home on a more personal level with a good friend whose husband was a part of the first military campaign in Iraq. They are still trying to work out the dynamics of their relationship. Before he left, they were planning to buy a house, have children. Now they are just trying to get through "issues" still being a couple.
I'm glad the poem touched you on such a personal level. But then again what is poetry for. Thanks for elaborating on the earlier comment.
12th Aug 2011 10:47am
This Poem Hits Me To The Core,
I Believe That This Love And Understanding
Is All That Holds Us Together
And Nothing Will Matter. No Matter Can Matter,
But Energy Is Bound By The Force Of Love
At It Flows Free
I Believe That This Love And Understanding
Is All That Holds Us Together
And Nothing Will Matter. No Matter Can Matter,
But Energy Is Bound By The Force Of Love
At It Flows Free
13th Aug 2011 5:48am
It touches me that my poem affected you this way --
to the core -- and your comment, well, I couldn't have said it better myself. Let the force of love flow free. :)
to the core -- and your comment, well, I couldn't have said it better myself. Let the force of love flow free. :)
