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Unseen Mist
this which you ask of me
no light task indeed
can't do it all alone
you must do your share
not likely to happen the way
you think
instead when you see the figure
in the white mist
you have seen her before
she is kind and good
you won't mistake her
feel her loving arms around you
feel her kissing your pain
and tears away
open your third eye
and listen closely to
what she is saying
be open and let osmosis
permeate her into you
until she is in every cell
of your being
so you can understand and
hear what she is telling you
feel what you should do
from there it's up to you
no light task indeed
can't do it all alone
you must do your share
not likely to happen the way
you think
instead when you see the figure
in the white mist
you have seen her before
she is kind and good
you won't mistake her
feel her loving arms around you
feel her kissing your pain
and tears away
open your third eye
and listen closely to
what she is saying
be open and let osmosis
permeate her into you
until she is in every cell
of your being
so you can understand and
hear what she is telling you
feel what you should do
from there it's up to you
Published 4th Aug 2011
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4th Aug 2011 11:13pm
4th Aug 2011 11:21pm
2nd Feb 2012 00:36am
perhaps you are referring to the theme? or message? because it was very unclear... 'you ask of me' "but it's up to you"???? changed muse at the end? this erases every thing before that last phrase. lost in translation...
3rd Feb 2012 2:19am
Sorry. This poem was written for someone special, and I was hoping that he would understand its coded message. :)
