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Baptize Me
pounding into wet pussy
while you’re bent over the edge
dunking you in with my brutal force
lifting your head up to salvation
the gasp speaks of bordering death
bringing my arousal to its peak
down again into this taboo
your thighs quiver against mine
my relenting grip sinks in the fear
adrenaline rushes through my body
and panic overpowers my mind
while i struggle to stay alive
i can’t breathe, i can’t move
i try to fight you with all my power
my body is weakened, you’re too strong
there’s no way i can escape this battle
nothing left than surrender to you
as your grip gets even firmer
floating hair becomes nostalgic
i’m completely immersed in a trance
while i feel your pulsating cunt weaken
snapping out, i quickly lift your head
movement stops until finally breath
a quick cheek kiss to show i’m proud
reincarnated into a holy fucker
i pull back on your soaked locks
dragging you onto the floor
pushed flat on my stomach
flesh pressed against the tiles
the animal inside you fully awake
your thrusting becomes more brutal
while you forcefully grab my hair
loud growls escape your mouth
my exhausted body surrendered
reduced to be your cum slut
as you spill your seed inside me
this golden night ends as such
as i stand up to wash away your sins
baptizing your body with my steady stream
still in a daze you lead me to the shower
showing me love, holding me close
sealing the night with a passionate kiss
while you’re bent over the edge
dunking you in with my brutal force
lifting your head up to salvation
the gasp speaks of bordering death
bringing my arousal to its peak
down again into this taboo
your thighs quiver against mine
my relenting grip sinks in the fear
adrenaline rushes through my body
and panic overpowers my mind
while i struggle to stay alive
i can’t breathe, i can’t move
i try to fight you with all my power
my body is weakened, you’re too strong
there’s no way i can escape this battle
nothing left than surrender to you
as your grip gets even firmer
floating hair becomes nostalgic
i’m completely immersed in a trance
while i feel your pulsating cunt weaken
snapping out, i quickly lift your head
movement stops until finally breath
a quick cheek kiss to show i’m proud
reincarnated into a holy fucker
i pull back on your soaked locks
dragging you onto the floor
pushed flat on my stomach
flesh pressed against the tiles
the animal inside you fully awake
your thrusting becomes more brutal
while you forcefully grab my hair
loud growls escape your mouth
my exhausted body surrendered
reduced to be your cum slut
as you spill your seed inside me
this golden night ends as such
as i stand up to wash away your sins
baptizing your body with my steady stream
still in a daze you lead me to the shower
showing me love, holding me close
sealing the night with a passionate kiss
Published 2nd Nov 2016
| Edited 3rd Dec 2024
Author's Note
A Collab with DevilsChild.
https://youtu.be/FkOQH4PM9_c
https://youtu.be/FkOQH4PM9_c
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2nd Nov 2016 9:27am
Sexy as hell it is :-)
You are a true artist yourself and your 'yum yum' made me smile!
Thank you for this amazing experience!
You are a true artist yourself and your 'yum yum' made me smile!
Thank you for this amazing experience!
Anonymous
2nd Nov 2016 9:38am
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2nd Nov 2016 9:59am
Thanks Adam!
So glad to hear you enjoyed our poem :-)
Thanks from the both of us for commenting!
So glad to hear you enjoyed our poem :-)
Thanks from the both of us for commenting!
2nd Nov 2016 12:40pm
Well, that was intense! Your voices merged flawlessly, beautifully. I forgot to breathe at one point...something about being under water, perhaps. Well written! :)
Willow
Willow
2nd Nov 2016 3:53pm
Wow... if you forgot to breathe we must have done something right ;-)
That our voices merged flawlessly is an amazing compliment!
We both thank you very much for your comment!
That our voices merged flawlessly is an amazing compliment!
We both thank you very much for your comment!
Anonymous
2nd Nov 2016 3:22pm
Holy Hot Purple Flame!!! Duende & Devils.......whew.......hot hot hot collab......it's absolutely perfection!!!! You just jumped started my morning........mmmmmmm......enjoyed this ALOT!!!! Purple luv & hugs to you both xo :)
Flowergirl!!! Your enthusiasm is smile inducing as always :-D
I can almost see you jumping in front of your screen ;-)
Great to hear you enjoyed this one and call it absolutely perfection!
Thank you so much from the both of us!
P.S. You rock!
I can almost see you jumping in front of your screen ;-)
Great to hear you enjoyed this one and call it absolutely perfection!
Thank you so much from the both of us!
P.S. You rock!
2nd Nov 2016 6:23pm
3rd Nov 2016 4:34am
Thank you so much, dear Crim!
I already had the idea you would like this one ;-)
We both really appreciate your comment!
Love, Duende
I already had the idea you would like this one ;-)
We both really appreciate your comment!
Love, Duende
Anonymous
2nd Nov 2016 11:10pm
what a beautiful tango of words..
sensual and seamless..
from poet to poetess
enjoyed the ambiance indeed..
sensual and seamless..
from poet to poetess
enjoyed the ambiance indeed..
3rd Nov 2016 4:37am
Thank you so much for your comment, Naajir!
Great to hear you enjoyed this one :-)
Sensual and seamless... we can't ask for more!
Great to hear you enjoyed this one :-)
Sensual and seamless... we can't ask for more!
Anonymous
2nd Nov 2016 11:53pm
Duende.. your voices intertwined and became one.. simply brilliant.. loved this..
Dave
Dave
Dave, your comment made me smile!
It's so great to hear you love this collab as well... saying that our voices intertwined and became one is an amazing compliment!
We both thank you very much!
It's so great to hear you love this collab as well... saying that our voices intertwined and became one is an amazing compliment!
We both thank you very much!
3rd Nov 2016 4:10pm
This joint is pure fire. I like the layout and where you two guided us as your readers.
Beautiful mass.
and thankyou for the add Ms.
Beautiful mass.
and thankyou for the add Ms.
3rd Nov 2016 4:38pm
Wow... this joint is pure fire! That's an amazing compliment!
We were aware of the fact that this one was on the extreme side,
so we're really happy it was well received!
We both thank you very much for your comment!
We were aware of the fact that this one was on the extreme side,
so we're really happy it was well received!
We both thank you very much for your comment!
3rd Nov 2016 10:52pm
Yes, it's extreme but so beautifully written you get away with it. I like the contrast, with DevilsChild waxing sacred and you still down to earth.
this golden night ends as such
as I stand up to wash away your sins
baptizing your body with my steady stream
still in a daze, you lead me to the shower
showing me love, holding me close
sealing the night with a passionate kiss
Loved both the wording and chemistry. Excellent work!
this golden night ends as such
as I stand up to wash away your sins
baptizing your body with my steady stream
still in a daze, you lead me to the shower
showing me love, holding me close
sealing the night with a passionate kiss
Loved both the wording and chemistry. Excellent work!
4th Nov 2016 6:20am
Thank you so much, Crowfly!
Your comment made me smile :-)
Great to hear you love this one
Excellent... we can't ask for more...
We both really appreciate your words!
Your comment made me smile :-)
Great to hear you love this one
Excellent... we can't ask for more...
We both really appreciate your words!
6th Nov 2016 10:14am
*sigh* Here you are again, Duende, writing the things I only wish to really know about. :)
A great dance with DC, I enjoyed this write...I wish to say more, but I seem to have lost my words "under water." ;)
A great dance with DC, I enjoyed this write...I wish to say more, but I seem to have lost my words "under water." ;)
6th Nov 2016 12:17pm
Thank you so much for your comment, lovely dark one!
I know the feeling of not knowing what to write and of course I already had the idea you would enjoy this one ;-)
We both really appreciate your words!
I know the feeling of not knowing what to write and of course I already had the idea you would enjoy this one ;-)
We both really appreciate your words!
20th Nov 2016 6:59pm
Fuckin' spectacular!!
I read this with complete shock on my face!! (Seriously, you should have seen it)
I can't remember ever reading something so intense before!!
I read this with complete shock on my face!! (Seriously, you should have seen it)
I can't remember ever reading something so intense before!!
21st Nov 2016 2:39pm
Seriously... you should see the smile on my face :-)
We were aiming for something that would shock some people, so I'm glad to hear we accomplished our mission ;-)
Fuckin' spectacular > we can't ask for more!
We were aiming for something that would shock some people, so I'm glad to hear we accomplished our mission ;-)
Fuckin' spectacular > we can't ask for more!
20th Nov 2016 7:06pm
Picked up on some naughtiness that I didn't catch on the first read!! (That's usual for me)
I'm taken aback, ineffable!!
I'm taken aback, ineffable!!
21st Nov 2016 2:41pm
I think I know what you mean ;-)
DC and I share some perverted kinks...
Thank you so much for both your comments!
DC and I share some perverted kinks...
Thank you so much for both your comments!
21st Nov 2016 10:58pm
Dunno if I share all the same kinks, but it sure seems fun!! Yall must have an out of this world connection.
22nd Nov 2016 4:45pm
Believe it or not... there are some kinks that I find too extreme ;-)
And yes... it's a special connection for sure...
And yes... it's a special connection for sure...
