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infinity
you write your poetry
on my porcelain skin in ash
then come the storm clouds
brewing behind your eyes
and wash it all away
i'm left with memories
of the time you spent
inking out constellations
of thought on every curve
then awaken with the knowledge
you never meant a single word
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Re. infinity
24th Oct 2016 4:53pm
Eh . . . That's the way it goes, Brenda, more often than not . . . Some men, for reasons not understood can mean those words when he writes, or says them. but has difficulty maintaining a genuine relationship . . .
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24th Oct 2016 5:55pm
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Anonymous
24th Oct 2016 4:55pm
O Brenda...I understand the depths of this sad, passionate write.
I feel you deeply. 💓
Such a painful experience.
You captured it well.
(((Hugs)) to you, my friend.
I feel you deeply. 💓
Such a painful experience.
You captured it well.
(((Hugs)) to you, my friend.
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24th Oct 2016 5:56pm
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24th Oct 2016 5:16pm
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24th Oct 2016 5:56pm
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24th Oct 2016 6:10pm
Oh, bittersweet doesn't even begin to describe this work of art. Your words breathe life into the painting as they become etched into the flesh... so soft, even ticklish as the ink spreads across ones skin, seeping beneath the surface, only to be erased just as they reach the heart...
So much worse than being teased to the brink of ecstasy then left to pleasure ones self... for the pleasure would come to a natural end but the words washed away could have remained for eternity. And so instead their is infinite emptiness and sorrow!
A masterpiece of imagery in verse dear Brenda!!!
JJ
So much worse than being teased to the brink of ecstasy then left to pleasure ones self... for the pleasure would come to a natural end but the words washed away could have remained for eternity. And so instead their is infinite emptiness and sorrow!
A masterpiece of imagery in verse dear Brenda!!!
JJ
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Re: Re. infinity
24th Oct 2016 7:13pm
thank you dearest JJ for your very deep interpretation of this write making me see things in it I felt but did not recognize at first..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. infinity
24th Oct 2016 8:59pm
I did mean every single word!! Onslaught huh? Oh...u mean someone else!? Oh oopsie! lol... Seriously Though this was exceptional. :)
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25th Oct 2016 12:53pm
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24th Oct 2016 10:11pm
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25th Oct 2016 12:53pm
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Anonymous
24th Oct 2016 11:39pm
Brenda.. so brilliantly beautiful, and yet so sad and heartbreaking.. as are most emotions.. love you!!
Dave
Dave
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25th Oct 2016 12:55pm
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25th Oct 2016 00:26am
Your beautiful words, Crim, were so utterly meloncholy and I felt them, so deeply.
Beautiful in your vulnerability,I would hug you if only I could reach...
Beautiful in your vulnerability,I would hug you if only I could reach...
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25th Oct 2016 12:54pm
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25th Oct 2016 00:57am
Ouch. Maybe he did at the time he inked them. We all change moment to moment, and can't remain the same forever. A very tender tale you tell, Brenda.
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25th Oct 2016 12:56pm
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25th Oct 2016 1:58am
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25th Oct 2016 12:57pm
Re. infinity
25th Oct 2016 2:55am
This is filled with emotion. Unfortunately this is how some things go in life. A good piece.
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Anonymous
3rd Nov 2016 3:27am
My ladyloves, you have the most sensualist ways
of expressing yourself. No matter the sphere.
Love ya babe, I miss u
of expressing yourself. No matter the sphere.
Love ya babe, I miss u
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