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one day I will write a poem
one day
i will write a poem
taking you behind my eye
so you can see
if not feel
one day
i will write a poem
which will be perfect
in your eyes
with no catastrophes
of misplaced apostrophes
one day
© KDAmB 2016. All rights reserved.
i will write a poem
taking you behind my eye
so you can see
if not feel
one day
i will write a poem
which will be perfect
in your eyes
with no catastrophes
of misplaced apostrophes
one day
© KDAmB 2016. All rights reserved.
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Re. one day I will write a poem
21st Oct 2016 1:08am
Re: Re. one day I will write a poem
21st Oct 2016 1:18am
Re. one day I will write a poem
21st Oct 2016 1:56am
I think someone has been nit-picking to worry about apostrophes... if you write poetry perfect in your own eyes, the one reading it who cannot see past the dots on their eyes... write for yourself, if others like it, it doesn't matter what nitpickers think!
JJ
JJ
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Re: Re. one day I will write a poem
21st Oct 2016 2:09am
emblazoned your feedback on my mind's plate JJ! off course we write for ourselves... I only write when this overwhelming sense/urge to pen down the feelings compell me ..... Thank You for your wise and true words JJ! Always strike me heart!
kind regards
KDAmB
kind regards
KDAmB
Re. one day I will write a poem
21st Oct 2016 2:07am
Re: Re. one day I will write a poem
21st Oct 2016 2:20am
well it is.... albeit one-sided.. no malice off course only an expression of determination! Glad you liked it and Thanks Heaps for the honor of RL!
Re. one day I will write a poem
21st Oct 2016 3:32am
I love this it is so clever, I particularly love the last two lines :-)
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Re: Re. one day I will write a poem
21st Oct 2016 4:07am
wow!! Welcome dear Friend!! I am so glad first, on your visit and also on the fact that you liked it! Can't say Thank You enough Dave!!
warm regards
KDAmB
warm regards
KDAmB
Re. one day I will write a poem
21st Oct 2016 8:26am
Re: Re. one day I will write a poem
21st Oct 2016 1:16pm
Welcome P-S!!
I am glad you liked it. I thank You sincerely for the kind appreciation!
:-)
KDAmB
I am glad you liked it. I thank You sincerely for the kind appreciation!
:-)
KDAmB
Re. one day I will write a poem
21st Oct 2016 8:30am
I don't know, from where I sit this is pretty perfect. One day appears to be here already :)
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Re: Re. one day I will write a poem
21st Oct 2016 1:18pm
hahaaha! lol! Thank You dear friend Willows! I wish I too could see what your generous eyes can! I welcome your visit and such affection!!
Thank You!
KDAmB
Thank You!
KDAmB
Re. one day I will write a poem
21st Oct 2016 9:42am
A poem you will one day write
That day was today
Look, look I was write! lol
Great poem man, I really enjoyed it, simple and elegant.
~anonshadow😏
That day was today
Look, look I was write! lol
Great poem man, I really enjoyed it, simple and elegant.
~anonshadow😏
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Re: Re. one day I will write a poem
21st Oct 2016 1:21pm
Hey Bro Anon!! Welcome!
elated that you enjoyed the simple write bro, means a lot to hear such high praise from poets like you and all the gracious ones who've commented here!!
Thank You so very much bro!!
KDAmB
elated that you enjoyed the simple write bro, means a lot to hear such high praise from poets like you and all the gracious ones who've commented here!!
Thank You so very much bro!!
KDAmB
Re. one day I will write a poem
21st Oct 2016 10:55am
That there is a damn perfect piece of writing mate!
Big ups and awsomeness!
Looks pretty damn sexy on the page to
And the love...
Oozes between them lines
Love it!
Big ups and awsomeness!
Looks pretty damn sexy on the page to
And the love...
Oozes between them lines
Love it!
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Re: Re. one day I will write a poem
21st Oct 2016 1:24pm
wow!! that is my day right here... Mr.Poet himself on my scribble page!! First of all, a hearty welcome and then, a huuge Thank You! for both the visit and generous appreciation. No words to describe my gratitude!!
warm regards
KDAmB
warm regards
KDAmB
Re: Re. one day I will write a poem
22nd Oct 2016 2:30pm
"Mr. Poet" bwaah! oh goodness! I covered the monitor of this puter in vanila milkshake. You're funny for a birdie.
The pleasure was all mine, my friend... There are some epic pages in your book! What an awsome time was had!
The pleasure was all mine, my friend... There are some epic pages in your book! What an awsome time was had!
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Re: Re. one day I will write a poem
24th Oct 2016 11:34am
much obliged my Friend! well... said what I said and am elated to say the least you found my scribbles to be enjoyable! well the natives don't call this chirpy, noisy birdie the messenger bird for no reason...
Re. one day I will write a poem
22nd Oct 2016 8:00am
Re: Re. one day I will write a poem
24th Oct 2016 11:36am
Thank You bro...your visits and kind words always boost my morale and make me smile!!!
regards
KDAmB
regards
KDAmB
Re. one day I will write a poem
22nd Oct 2016 3:17pm
Re: Re. one day I will write a poem
24th Oct 2016 12:29pm
Welcome dear friend Duende!
Glad, so so glad you liked the scribble! Thank you so much for your kind appreciation and visiting with me!! 🎉 ☺ ☺
KDAmB
Glad, so so glad you liked the scribble! Thank you so much for your kind appreciation and visiting with me!! 🎉 ☺ ☺
KDAmB
Re. one day I will write a poem
24th Oct 2016 11:26am
Re: Re. one day I will write a poem
24th Oct 2016 12:31pm
This is my luckiest poem indeed... both my friend Bluesky and Mr Blue skies visited! Thank you my dear friend!! ☺
Re. one day I will write a poem
26th Oct 2016 12:13pm
Re: Re. one day I will write a poem
29th Oct 2016 6:03am
Utterly utterly humbled is KDAmB LR by your visit and such high praise! No words enough to express my gratitude! Thank you Friend 😃!!
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