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Morphine
slices to the vein
with a morphine spike
take me downtown fast
with the ladies of the night
the Red Light District
flash of the lewd
porno playing on a constant reel
in the theater of the mind
enter my depravity
adults only
willing to pay to play
negotiate our sex games
you lay it down hard
my pussy open for business
take me with force
show me who's boss
I don't know any other way
teach me a lesson I won't soon forget
I'm a cock tease
take your fist to my cunt
pound me hard
open me all the way up
bruise my tender pussy lips
lascivious behavior
checked by a man
who know's what he's doing
understands the mind of a whore
take me to the Red Light District
where we can be ourselves
with a morphine spike
take me downtown fast
with the ladies of the night
the Red Light District
flash of the lewd
porno playing on a constant reel
in the theater of the mind
enter my depravity
adults only
willing to pay to play
negotiate our sex games
you lay it down hard
my pussy open for business
take me with force
show me who's boss
I don't know any other way
teach me a lesson I won't soon forget
I'm a cock tease
take your fist to my cunt
pound me hard
open me all the way up
bruise my tender pussy lips
lascivious behavior
checked by a man
who know's what he's doing
understands the mind of a whore
take me to the Red Light District
where we can be ourselves
Published 18th Oct 2016
| Edited 23rd Oct 2016
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18th Oct 2016 7:25am
This is so awesome! Right up my perverted part of my mind, hehe. Was done it an artistic, but raw way. Right up there with some of your best. Well, to me at least it is 😁
18th Oct 2016 7:47am
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18th Oct 2016 11:11am
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18th Oct 2016 12:16pm
18th Oct 2016 11:25am
DeWallin, exortic & a paradise I've never been to,
but where I have been, there have been whores.
great title for the kinda sex that gets you high,
Crim takes us there & gets us off, hard, as hard as she does...
but where I have been, there have been whores.
great title for the kinda sex that gets you high,
Crim takes us there & gets us off, hard, as hard as she does...
18th Oct 2016 12:17pm
thank you John i've never been there either sounds like a good high ;)
love Crim
love Crim
Anonymous
18th Oct 2016 11:29am
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Anonymous
18th Oct 2016 12:38pm
Brilliant sensual write 💓
Creative juices flowing...I see;)
Awesome ink.
Creative juices flowing...I see;)
Awesome ink.
18th Oct 2016 12:49pm
18th Oct 2016 1:56pm
My my, I love your edges, Brenda! You are amazing! Straight up and true to self. I love it! :)
18th Oct 2016 5:44pm
18th Oct 2016 2:57pm
Sometimes we feel more ourselves in the dark and a shade of red neon. Just letting go and have someone else take control. Poignant write here.
18th Oct 2016 5:44pm
18th Oct 2016 3:06pm
Heh.Heh I can see by your comments,
Brenda, that this one was a 100 percent
standout winner. You took on the "street"
and chewed it up, didn't swallow, but spit
it out. Thirty-Second Street, New York.
Fifth Street, Los Angeles, and all the
fleshpots in between. Fantastic! This is a keeper.
Brenda, that this one was a 100 percent
standout winner. You took on the "street"
and chewed it up, didn't swallow, but spit
it out. Thirty-Second Street, New York.
Fifth Street, Los Angeles, and all the
fleshpots in between. Fantastic! This is a keeper.
18th Oct 2016 5:45pm
with a big smile on my face I thank you graciously Jerry you made my morning :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
18th Oct 2016 6:25pm
You can tease me all you want Crim. I've become addicted to your work, and "Morphine"'s my latest fix.
lascivious behavior
checked by a man
who know's what he's doing
understands the mind of a whore
The more I read the more I comprehend. Always a pleasure fine Lady!
lascivious behavior
checked by a man
who know's what he's doing
understands the mind of a whore
The more I read the more I comprehend. Always a pleasure fine Lady!
18th Oct 2016 6:34pm
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Anonymous
19th Oct 2016 6:05pm
My Beautiful Brenda bringing out her raw edges...you are stirring my depravity with such thoughts my lovely one...and stir me you always do...
I love you so much!
Xoxoxo Taryn
I love you so much!
Xoxoxo Taryn
20th Oct 2016 2:47pm
19th Oct 2016 6:58pm
Raw and honest! One of your best, dear Crim!
That last line speaks volumes!
You made your life into a piece of art (is all I can think right now)
Love, Duende
That last line speaks volumes!
You made your life into a piece of art (is all I can think right now)
Love, Duende
20th Oct 2016 2:48pm
thank you most graciously lovely Duende you made me smile with your comment :)
love Crim
love Crim
Anonymous
21st Oct 2016 11:09pm
Brenda.. written as only you can.. goosebumps!! your poetry always moves me.. with love..
Dave
Dave
22nd Oct 2016 9:13pm
4th Dec 2016 8:52pm
This is absolutely incredible!
It's so addictive and provocative.
Amazing job well done :)
It's so addictive and provocative.
Amazing job well done :)
10th Dec 2016 3:15am
