***Mortal Child***

Ooooh! Jesus, Brenda, this one kicked my ass
and I'm still hurting. Had to look up one word  . .
Cassiopeia! The awful fact that we have to, in our
own ways, "face the mirror." This a GREAT poem,
my friend, unbelievably great!

Maybe I didn't exactly "get" the poem,
but I'm satisfied with what I did "get!"

thank you Jerry you made my day :)
yes we do indeed all of have to face the mirror..

love Brenda

thank you lovely Amelia for feeling my ach..

love Crim

Beauty-full..... come to Dada!

aw thank you Dada i'm on my way :)

love Brenda

Oh, Brenda, my goodness this is gorgeous!  I learned something new as a result of this beautiful read.  I had never looked into the story of Cassiopeia and Poseidon much before.  So much longing and sadness wrapped in your words here.  

thank you beautiful Willow you know it's funny her name just popped into my mind and I had to Google her as well.. love you lovely one :)

xo Brenda

Love this beautiful passionate write 💓
The longing is deeply felt.
Brilliant ink.

thank you lovely Heart for feeling me on this write..

love Brenda

Honey.. my ladyloves you have literally been
sweeping me off my feet.. and no I;m not
here as much but wooow you are so
deeply in;joyed

Making me speechless here woman!

muwah loving ya



-Howlings

thank you beautiful Howlings love your response to this write and I cherish your presence :)

love Crim

Ah,Crimsin,your poetry amazes. Such beauty in your saddness and it is truly felt....

thank you lovely Kasai for feeling me..

love Crim

I love it when you change it up and give us glimpses of who you are. Excellent ink, my Lady Crim.

thank you my Darkest Lord it's a pleasure letting you see the real me..

love Crim

Just when I was about to ban all mirrors from my house, and after reading this I have decided to keep one :-)

so damn good this one :-)

thank you David I understand my friend love you...

xo Brenda

Wowzers Crim.....you're so precious......this write of truth struck me thru my soul......I'm facing the mirror......not liking much the truth it says.......thought provoking write my friend.....purple luv & hugs xo :)

thank you lovely Flower for understanding and relating :)

love Crim

Oh my dear Crim, I felt this one...

To face the mirror and dislike what you see...
I felt your ache in this piece, an ache that resonates!

Love, Duende

thank you lovely Duende yes it's hard to watch you beauty fade with time but to die to vanity and hopefully gain some wisdom instead is a fair enough trade off I think..

love Crim

fire in the sky, thoroughly sensuous.
all those sad young men...

thank you John for leaving your poetic mark on this write..

love Crim

Brenda.. goddamn.. so beautiful, and brilliant.. i love you!!




Dave

aw thank you Dave I love you my friend :)

xo Brenda