The Art Of Becoming

thank you for you thoughts..

love Crim

Sounds like a long awaited and overdue reunion. So many ways this can be read. I'm smiling at all of them. I bow before your pen, my lady  :)

thank you lovely Willow this is speaking to you my poetic family and my flesh family I knew this would bring so many different interpretations I welcome them all :)

love Brenda

This is interesting though I am not familiar with the guardians or their story. Tell me more...
JJ

thank you for your interest JJ I believe there are unknown forces that bring us together for special purposes.. separated for a season and carefully guarded during that time.. then reunited we become one making each other stronger..

love Brenda

Nothing like going back to the place where we all once started ... Reminds me of siblings, daughters & sons once aching to leave [home] now yearning to come back ... It is a cycle in life - not of - something I believe we`ve all been through ... my Queen, a great grasp of sentiment & imagery in words that can be construed in any way ... love you, Lady ... ~Devlin.

thank you my Queen you understand this write better than I do big sigh I love you..

xo Brenda

Thia reminds me of someone I know. Her family,  
like the one in this poem had scattered over the  
years to here and there, but are beginning, one by  
one, family by family, to move closer to the where  
they all came from. It is delightful to hear her talk  
about it, as it is to read about this family in your poem,  
whether it is your family or not, makes no difference.

thank you Jerry for feeling this write.. we are all universally family in so many ways..

love Brenda

This is such a beautiful and interesting write!
Open for several interpretations...

I especially loved the last two lines... "deflect negative energy" > that's what it's all about!

Love, Duende

thank you lovely Duende it's a meeting of minds to become a powerful entity..

love Crim

Agree with your reply to JJ, Brenda! a refreshing and soothing read I found this one to be and for that I say Thank You Brenda!! you're a gem

thank you most graciously KDAmB..

love Brenda

thank you lovely Amelia for embracing this write..

love Crim

This is excellent.. When I reflect on when I first came here. To what I am writing today. Your poem is precisely why I have stayed. Thank you, malady.
✨Trish

I'm grateful you're here thank you lovely Trish..

love Brenda

Lovely, Brenda. I adore this vein of thought and how you penned it.

thank you Sage one for getting and embracing this write.. my children are Native American and when beginning this write saw it as just my family then realized the true fountain of inspiration ran much deeper..

love Brenda

thank you Nemo no you're not alone my friend..

love Brenda

loved this, very atmospheric, very positive piece :-)

thank you David you made smile :)

love Brenda

Brenda.. a lovely scribe.. from a talented lady.. sorry i'm not around as much.. but when i do return, it's addictive to read your works.. back to back.. they tell a story, of a brilliant lady.. love you!!



Dave

thank you so much Dave it's alight I deeply appreciate when you are here :)

love Brenda

The bond of family is strong in this, the message is strong n sweetly expressed too :)

thank you dearest Poe :)

love you..

xo Brenda

Family members can be so widely scattered that the bond erodes over time.  The Crow clan certainly needs some closer ties.  Without them it can be murder.  Fine love poem Crim!

thank you Sir Crow my ties to these will never let love go..

love Crim