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2nd Oct 2016 11:27pm
3rd Oct 2016 3:55pm
Hullo
ever so intriguing, Ophie. my first thoughts were to Rambo, first blood. the scene when he's getting prepared for the ish to hit the fan
marvelous stuff, Miss
ever so intriguing, Ophie. my first thoughts were to Rambo, first blood. the scene when he's getting prepared for the ish to hit the fan
marvelous stuff, Miss
5th Oct 2016 1:24pm
Reading after a long time...
I like the open plot from you as always you leave for your readers.
Maybe this blood has either side definitions as you have chosen lukewarm as its current state.
I like the open plot from you as always you leave for your readers.
Maybe this blood has either side definitions as you have chosen lukewarm as its current state.
5th Feb 2017 7:32am
it juz works for me . everytym i read u, Ophie. Intense in those few words tat makes me read them agn n agn. ' blood' ' lukewarm' 'hands' ' first' 'beginning'..u have them all. the links. chaos hazy yet beautifully revealing to me. loved this dear
11th May 2017 1:20pm
Congratulations! This poem has been nominated for Deep Underground Poetry's Featured Poem of the Month Competition. You may view the nomination at the link below, and will be notified if selected.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/9621/30/#393759
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https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/9621/30/#393759
Best of Luck and thank you for being a member of the Deep Side!
13th May 2017 8:52am
