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Feline
The scent of my stroll 'cross the fence
'Neath the midnight blue of a new moon
Arouses my gentleman's sense
On this night down the street where he croons.
He sings to me in the clear night
Each call we arch in sympathy
I reply with thrill of invite
I hasten while he waits for me.
He's there, here am I in a trance
So awake & alert as we greet
To leap and to spin as we dance
And share in our nuzzles so sweet.
There's nothing more to stimulate
When it comes to a tryst in the dark
To meet where humans congregate
Best unseen when the time comes to spark.
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 1st Oct 2016
| Edited 21st Feb 2018
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Re. Feline
This is done with genuine class, the human and cat elements smoothly combined:
"He sings out to me in the clear night
with each call we arch in sympathy
I reply with the thrill of invite
as I hasten while he waits for me.
There he is, here am I in a trance
yet awake so alert as we greet
then to leap and to spin as we dance
and to share in our nuzzles so sweet."
Feline fine, Jade. I'm more of a dog person but not this time.
"He sings out to me in the clear night
with each call we arch in sympathy
I reply with the thrill of invite
as I hasten while he waits for me.
There he is, here am I in a trance
yet awake so alert as we greet
then to leap and to spin as we dance
and to share in our nuzzles so sweet."
Feline fine, Jade. I'm more of a dog person but not this time.
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Ahh, my crowfly friend, your generous words, embrace, and ever support, is a beam to receive, and I thank you so much. --Jadey🐾
Re. Feline
1st Oct 2016 7:52pm
The scent of my stroll 'cross the fences
'neath the midnight blue of a new moon
arouses my gentleman's senses
on this night down the street where he croons.
I think you know exactly how I feel about this...
I love your feline exclamations...
tommy
'neath the midnight blue of a new moon
arouses my gentleman's senses
on this night down the street where he croons.
I think you know exactly how I feel about this...
I love your feline exclamations...
tommy
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3rd Oct 2016 1:54am
Re. Feline
1st Oct 2016 7:56pm
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Thank you, sweet one, for placing my little write on the same level as T S Elliot, my goodness!
I'm so glad for your embrace & share.
--Jade🐾
I'm so glad for your embrace & share.
--Jade🐾
Re. Feline
2nd Oct 2016 7:48pm
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Thank you most kindly to come by to leave me your thoughts, I'm glad you've enjoyed.
And warm welcome to DUP.🐾
And warm welcome to DUP.🐾
Re. Feline
Anonymous
2nd Oct 2016 9:37pm
I had to read this twice ... I admire your use of Feline or Felines for this piece ... While others think of cats, I think of two limbered lovers entangled so deeply into and around one another that nothing tragic could possibly tear them apart ... The mating call is very potent ... Excellent ink, Miss Jade(y) ... love to you ... ~Devlin.
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Oh dearest Devlin, your embrace and interpretation is perfection, just as it was for me when the piece spilled from the muse...
perfection! *touch pens*
mutual love to you,
Jade(y)🐾xo
perfection! *touch pens*
mutual love to you,
Jade(y)🐾xo
Re. Feline
3rd Oct 2016 5:32pm
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Re. Feline
3rd Oct 2016 11:17pm
Jade, having a tigress somewhere around here, we positively love, Love this piece. An absolute keeper! Mad respect and love,
the SQUAD🐾
the SQUAD🐾
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Re. Feline
4th Oct 2016 10:54am
Thank you so much for your wonderful and kindred embrace, SURVIVOR one, and another of mine taking a place of honor on your RL! And btw, I adore your signature!
with love,
always Jadey🐾
with love,
always Jadey🐾