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Pouring Rain
Exquisitely beautiful lady, bleeding sensual verse
Lyrically spiraling, encircling the words that come to mind
Pulsing ink flowing in rivers of well-aged red wine
Pouring Rain flooding my heart with waves of crimson tide
How I thirst for the taste of your deepest poetic flow
To inhale the scent spilling from the muses womb
Who gives birth to my most primitive inspirations
Life is breathed into the vocabulary of my soul
In the rhythmic meter throbbing with silent syllables
That sing the song crying inside my beating heart
Wanting to share the lyrics animated by your scintillating breath
To be in the grasp of artistic hands that weave your tapestry
Stroking my ardent mind to the height of mental climax
I crave the rain to pour on my creative soil for new seeds to grow
Lyrically spiraling, encircling the words that come to mind
Pulsing ink flowing in rivers of well-aged red wine
Pouring Rain flooding my heart with waves of crimson tide
How I thirst for the taste of your deepest poetic flow
To inhale the scent spilling from the muses womb
Who gives birth to my most primitive inspirations
Life is breathed into the vocabulary of my soul
In the rhythmic meter throbbing with silent syllables
That sing the song crying inside my beating heart
Wanting to share the lyrics animated by your scintillating breath
To be in the grasp of artistic hands that weave your tapestry
Stroking my ardent mind to the height of mental climax
I crave the rain to pour on my creative soil for new seeds to grow
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Re. Pouring Rain
Anonymous
24th Sep 2016 11:03am
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Re. Pouring Rain
24th Sep 2016 12:24pm
I love this!!! This ink is beautiful and it flows so smoothly from mind to soul. Elegant write love....it displays your artistic capabilities very well. 💋💋💋
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24th Sep 2016 9:14pm
Re. Pouring Rain
Great write here, JJ. You are always so honest in your words when you lay them down. <3
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25th Sep 2016 00:18am
Re. Pouring Rain
24th Sep 2016 3:17pm
Oh, JJ, this is breathtaking! You're such an incredible soul...it shows very intensely in this write. So beautiful! :)
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24th Sep 2016 9:19pm
Re. Pouring Rain
24th Sep 2016 5:20pm
May the rain harvest a field of everlasting sunshine to nourish your heart & soul... 🌻🎈🌞😎
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24th Sep 2016 9:12pm
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….and Rain smiles wide enough to move the sun in position to shine a lifetime. ;)
You give cause for rain to settle on the pane of your heart,
You give reasons for rain to fall without the deafening thunder,
….and you write with a pen that creates blissful aches of gentle affection
that can be felt by many. I adore this poem!
Respect, adoration, friendship, poetic-love…. xoxo
You give cause for rain to settle on the pane of your heart,
You give reasons for rain to fall without the deafening thunder,
….and you write with a pen that creates blissful aches of gentle affection
that can be felt by many. I adore this poem!
Respect, adoration, friendship, poetic-love…. xoxo
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You are a24 hour sun-shower that brings rainbows to enrich me with your golden verse...
Your inspiration is the force behind my pen!
JJ { {hugs} }Tara
Your inspiration is the force behind my pen!
JJ { {hugs} }Tara
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4th Oct 2016 3:57am
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25th Oct 2024 6:19am
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Anonymous
4th Oct 2016 1:23am
Wow JJ.....this not just sexy but super sensual ink.....your words are beautiful and luving.......voice is great.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Pouring Rain
4th Oct 2016 2:01am
Thanks G! I fixed the audio. Somehow these got mixed up. No idea how. I must have been super tired but it's right now...
JJ
JJ