From the heart series: 'Sole-Perfect'

I enjoyed this. Love where you say pulverulent stars and mirabilia. You know how I do, so my only suggestion would be to write more, increase the story. :D

Thanks so much bro. Funny enough I used to write way longer stories/pieces, but I was asked if I can
write sayin more with lesson it sounded to me like a challenge! sooooooo lol. Any who, grateful
as always lol

Thank you, appreciate ur time n thoughts :)

'And
the golden hue
of  pulverulent stars '
Great lines...

My sweet Kasai, I'm honored n humbled by your continued support...
Truly n deeply appreciate you :)

sheer excellence bro..
always amazed at
how your pen shifts into  
different paradigms..

Aaaawwww bro... Sincerely flattered
beyond words... Love n peace to you n yours :)

absolute magic, poe...
... those opening lines stole my breath
xo

My precious Katja, U are magic to me...
Thank you always n forever for ur unwaivering support :)

This was so damn creative, Poe! I'm always impressed when reading you. Missed ya....

Well you gotta know I feel the same about you my sweetness! n I truly appreciate u as well :)

First thought that came to mind after reading this was "beauty is in the eye of the beholder( or perhaps in this instance i should say "be...hold..her" seems both are held captive just as i was held captive by the marvelous ink...love the structure..and the imagery..i can picture two lovers gazing into each others eyes..well crafted ink sir..enjoyed!

PD! My sweetie, you gotta know I'm
 Happy to hear from u again n as always I'm flattered n grateful :)

PM!! I must agree with my Lovely Katja...that first section is breathtaking and the whole layout made this an incredible read...Bravo!

With love - Taryn xoxo

Hey sweetie, sorry for the late reply...
Thank you for your sweet praise n support always! Truly grateful for you :)

Erotic Ninja, luv ~

This poem is the creation of one who is replete with resplendent mirabilia. The way you manipulate, coax, tease, delicately caress, and, when called for, spank language is, well...fantastique, cher. :-*

I am ever blessed when I read your poetry, luv. Thank you more than I can possibly convey for the sheer beauty in which you allow me to immerse my mind.

She has finally come back to my page!! Wow am I'm happy for that! Your sincere n endearing commentary
has always inspired me to try n give more soooooo... Grateful n blessed I am for your support my dear Sav. :)

A very very heartfelt piece which gave me motion
sickness, I s'pose in a limbo'ish way.

It's when you write like this, one began to wonder,
how? what? and why? are so many of us in a  
state of longing.

Hmm.. .

So damn beautiful

-Howlings

If you need me to, I will aid you
with a potion for your motion lol
N yea, sadly I realized that 'longin'
in many others too but personally
I'm sure it could be relieved by
simply uniting for a common cause
of course I've still not found any like minded ones to test that theory out lol
Thank u so much my dearest, truly appreciate you :)

I love surfing the wave of your pen...

N I love every time u 'ride' me lol
I Thank u my sweetness truly n always :)

This is so different than your other work and so very creative, I'm a bit lost for words...

Beautiful phrasing and amazing layout! I agree with Howlings... there are so many people lost and longing, why?

Outstanding piece of ink, dear Poetik!