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Devour
O there it is behind me still,
it makes my eyes roll back until
I can't deny it isn't there
enticing me back to its lair.
The darkness of myself is to
consume me and my love for you
where just below the surface soiled
a serpent deviant is coiled.
Its glaring with unblinking eyes,
insinuates to hypnotize.
I can’t fight it, neither can you
what beast in us is made to do.
To dominate and mate with me
and drain the blood of life and be
fulfilled and writhe in ecstasy,
my body, palest cold for thee.
Before the darkness closes in
your lust devours while I grin.
Until the next time it repeats
When only in my dreams we meet.
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Published 6th Sep 2016
| Edited 30th May 2019
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6th Sep 2016 6:01am
6th Sep 2016 6:39am
Thank you sir I appreciate the read and share.
And welcome to DUP. I hope you'll stop by again.
And welcome to DUP. I hope you'll stop by again.
6th Sep 2016 9:49am
.....feels like i had a front row seat
in that shadowed corner of your mind..
this is exquisitely dark Jade.
in that shadowed corner of your mind..
this is exquisitely dark Jade.
7th Sep 2016 5:08am
7th Sep 2016 00:49am
Sinister but very much a turn on. You might have received a visit from an incubus passing himself off as a dream. Very well written, fun to read with the deft rhythm and rhyme scheme. Good luck with the contest Jade!
7th Sep 2016 5:57am
Ah thank you, my crowfly friend, with sincere gratitude. You know, with your enjoyment & support of my work with your very appreciated comments and insight, I often wonder if you'vr ever received notification of any of my replies to you. I've never figured out how that works on this site.
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8th Sep 2016 7:15pm
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8th Sep 2016 11:22pm
Oh my, thank you very much, dear Nemo! I'm so glad you came by to see me, and that you like this so much!
14th Sep 2016 11:03am
14th Sep 2016 5:34pm
17th Sep 2016 2:05pm
An update to my reply:
Thank you so much for the honor of the Recommendation, and for the Follow.
Thank you so much for the honor of the Recommendation, and for the Follow.
