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First Thing In the Morning
She's been trying to keep a grip
Retain what keeps her sane
But she can feel her reason slip
As she steps out in the rain
The storm has washed away the quai
The walls have broken down
Just an hour left to pray
Before she learns to drown
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She finally shakes away this dream
Doesn't see a drop
But her lover's cock is what it seems
So she consents to take the top...
Out for another early ride
A queen upon her mount
Her poise remains a point of pride
And she'll make the morning count.
Retain what keeps her sane
But she can feel her reason slip
As she steps out in the rain
The storm has washed away the quai
The walls have broken down
Just an hour left to pray
Before she learns to drown
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
She finally shakes away this dream
Doesn't see a drop
But her lover's cock is what it seems
So she consents to take the top...
Out for another early ride
A queen upon her mount
Her poise remains a point of pride
And she'll make the morning count.
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Re. First Thing In the Morning
4th Sep 2016 7:05pm
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4th Sep 2016 7:10pm
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4th Sep 2016 7:09pm
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Re. First Thing In the Morning
4th Sep 2016 7:43pm
Morning ride indeed! Love the sexually evocative Chinese proverb (although it could apply to strong responsible women generally not just in the bedroom).
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Re: Re. First Thing In the Morning
5th Sep 2016 9:09pm
Thank you Solomon. I like the proverb and the art that goes with it. From a source unknown unfortunately.
Re. First Thing In the Morning
4th Sep 2016 7:47pm
Thoroughly enjoyed...especially
the first and last stanzas. There is nothing quite like being saddled for
an early morning ride..
Keith
the first and last stanzas. There is nothing quite like being saddled for
an early morning ride..
Keith
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Thank you Keith! I prefer remaining bare backed myself unless it's in the bridle suite.
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6th Sep 2016 1:04am
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Anonymous
4th Sep 2016 8:11pm
A woman taking full control. Owning her moment upon her sexy beast. 💋
No one can tell a true erotic story..quite like you can, Crow.
Another masterpiece. 💓
No one can tell a true erotic story..quite like you can, Crow.
Another masterpiece. 💓

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Re: Re. First Thing In the Morning
5th Sep 2016 9:07pm
Re. First Thing In the Morning
4th Sep 2016 11:00pm
they shake the mountains when they dance - Cummings.
exquisitely erotic poetry...
exquisitely erotic poetry...
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Re: Re. First Thing In the Morning
5th Sep 2016 9:17pm
Thanks John. I'm only familiar with cumming's "Buffalo Bill's Defunct," had to memorize that in high school and never forgot it. "Jesus he was a handsome man...."
Re. First Thing In the Morning
5th Sep 2016 1:39am
Those morning love are lovely...miss them.:) good read Crowfly. Enjoyed thoroughly.
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5th Sep 2016 9:18pm
Re. First Thing In the Morning
5th Sep 2016 7:29pm
A lady can dream right?
well good , because I am ;)
missya my Crowfly
-Howlings
well good , because I am ;)
missya my Crowfly
-Howlings
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5th Sep 2016 9:20pm
Re. First Thing In the Morning
2nd Oct 2016 8:16am
Smashing last line to an outstanding write!
Nothing can beat an early morning ride :-)
Nothing can beat an early morning ride :-)
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