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Honey
The aroma of
your skin musk
& leather mix
seeps slowly
into my brain
Tickling my
amygdala
{HORNY}
hot damn
to taste you
feel you inside
filling me up
l i p s
first lips
lips on lips
tongues
patience.
is.
gone.
hungry
my tongue
starts sliding
Down
tracing words
darker than ink
on the blank
p
a
g
e
that was
your body
taste is now
the only sight
god i love your
sacred flavor
lick flick suck
slurping sounds
slathering saliva
while you grab
fistfuls of hair
stroking up
and down
Sloooowly
then
...faster
and faster
[PAUSE]
oh i love your
eager please
queen of tease
without patience
greedy i continue
in rhythmic motion
stroking stroking
up and down
mmm your sighs
groans and moans
when i take you
deeeeeeeep
in my throat
your force me
to go faster
up and down
i take your dick
till i have your slick
and sticky jissom
Ssslathered on my lips
your skin musk
& leather mix
seeps slowly
into my brain
Tickling my
amygdala
{HORNY}
hot damn
to taste you
feel you inside
filling me up
l i p s
first lips
lips on lips
tongues
patience.
is.
gone.
hungry
my tongue
starts sliding
Down
tracing words
darker than ink
on the blank
p
a
g
e
that was
your body
taste is now
the only sight
god i love your
sacred flavor
lick flick suck
slurping sounds
slathering saliva
while you grab
fistfuls of hair
stroking up
and down
Sloooowly
then
...faster
and faster
[PAUSE]
oh i love your
eager please
queen of tease
without patience
greedy i continue
in rhythmic motion
stroking stroking
up and down
mmm your sighs
groans and moans
when i take you
deeeeeeeep
in my throat
your force me
to go faster
up and down
i take your dick
till i have your slick
and sticky jissom
Ssslathered on my lips
Written by
Duende
Published 22nd Aug 2016
| Edited 3rd Dec 2024
Author's Note
Fiona Apple - Like Honey.
https://youtu.be/WoeIeg_JvoA
https://youtu.be/WoeIeg_JvoA
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22nd Aug 2016 9:00pm
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22nd Aug 2016 9:32pm
sweet as honey
her lips drips
what will you do ....
when she lets you
suck her low
rest at my place
some time more mow ere we both flow
her lips drips
what will you do ....
when she lets you
suck her low
rest at my place
some time more mow ere we both flow
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23rd Aug 2016 5:55am
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22nd Aug 2016 9:44pm
Very sexy write my dear!!!...nothing like the sweet taste of honey. 💋
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23rd Aug 2016 5:58am
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Anonymous
22nd Aug 2016 11:02pm
Okay!. . .This is right about the time when I can honestly say that I wish I could have been a man to read this. . .you caused my brain to erect, so I guess that's good enough!. . .*brilliant*, Lady Duende. .. ~xo, Devlin.
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23rd Aug 2016 6:02am
Lady Devlin, you always amaze me with your brilliant comments!
Brain erection... I can't ask for a greater compliment, thanks so much! XD
Brain erection... I can't ask for a greater compliment, thanks so much! XD
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22nd Aug 2016 11:40pm
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23rd Aug 2016 7:26am
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23rd Aug 2016 10:00am
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Anonymous
23rd Aug 2016 9:38am
This is so good! It still feels like you, but you've shaken up your style a little. I like the unexpected punctuation (Patience.Is.Gone.)–so effective. The alliteration and consonance through "lick flick suck slurping sounds slathering saliva" is just ahhhhh. You can hear the sound there through the words. There's so much good stuff here, but those are the bits that really caught my attention. It's not just sexy, it's smart, and you just can't beat that combination.
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Wow, I feel very flattered by your comment and the amazing compliments.. you've just made my day!
Great to hear that it still feels like me and yes, I tried to shaken and spice up my style ;-)
Based on a suggestion I received I tried to make people also smell and hear it... nice to hear that it worked out ;-)
Thank you for including this one in your reading list, that means a lot to me!
Great to hear that it still feels like me and yes, I tried to shaken and spice up my style ;-)
Based on a suggestion I received I tried to make people also smell and hear it... nice to hear that it worked out ;-)
Thank you for including this one in your reading list, that means a lot to me!
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23rd Aug 2016 9:52am
holy hell Duende got my blood stirring with this delicious erotic mmm so tasty and hot ;)
love Crim
love Crim
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23rd Aug 2016 10:07am
Crim, you make me smile big time with your holy hell and blood stirring :-)
Glad you liked it and thanks for the compliment!
Love, Duende
Glad you liked it and thanks for the compliment!
Love, Duende
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25th Aug 2016 9:59am
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25th Aug 2016 11:25am
Thank you for your beautiful comment and for mentioning the sound and the enjambment! I really liked experimenting with them:-)
As I wrote in the reply to mariekeys comment, based on your advice I tried to make people also hear and smell it...
Above all, this was a big step for me, so I feel honored that you liked the result!
"write on you crazy diamond" > this one I'm gonna cherish :-D (did you know I love Pink Floyd?)
As I wrote in the reply to mariekeys comment, based on your advice I tried to make people also hear and smell it...
Above all, this was a big step for me, so I feel honored that you liked the result!
"write on you crazy diamond" > this one I'm gonna cherish :-D (did you know I love Pink Floyd?)
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25th Aug 2016 2:58pm
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4th Sep 2016 6:29am
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Perfuming my mind with silk?
Wow... that's an amazing compliment, thank you! :-)
I truly appreciate that you took the time to read, listen and comment!!!
Wow... that's an amazing compliment, thank you! :-)
I truly appreciate that you took the time to read, listen and comment!!!
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Anonymous
12th Sep 2016 4:29am
Wowzers!!!!! What a hot delicous write Duende.......just when the hot flash started to cool down.....LOL!! Really enjoyed this sexy write.....well done.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Welcome to my world ;-)
You blew me away with your comment :-)
Thank you so much for your visit and your amazing words, glad to hear you enjoyed it!
You blew me away with your comment :-)
Thank you so much for your visit and your amazing words, glad to hear you enjoyed it!
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12th Sep 2016 2:48pm
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12th Sep 2016 3:00pm
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15th Sep 2016 5:40pm
......you are so damned addictive. (as well as the perfection at least for me-your musical choices) It's been hard to pull away from the screen this morning. Digesting your potions, has me at the edge of "Le Petit Mort", just shy of wet hands. Your words are so strongly erotic, defying all sense of sexual preference. Your words are deep lust and longing
as I have said, you addictive, just like a drug.
(...a mark of great writing Ms. D) 🌱🍄🍃
as I have said, you addictive, just like a drug.
(...a mark of great writing Ms. D) 🌱🍄🍃
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15th Sep 2016 6:25pm
Wow... ehm... damned addictive?
This is a case of too many compliments in one comment for a proper reply ;-)
Thank you for bringing a smile to my face that will last for hours and also for appreciating my musical choices!!!
This is a case of too many compliments in one comment for a proper reply ;-)
Thank you for bringing a smile to my face that will last for hours and also for appreciating my musical choices!!!
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26th Nov 2016 6:15pm
So hot! Again, I read with a face full of shock! That picture you picked, lit up my paleocortex like a 4th of July fireworks show!
Love the amygdala reference. ;)
Love the amygdala reference. ;)
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You were in shock again? ;-)
Great to hear you love this one as well as the agmygdala reference!
It took me a while to find the perfect picture so I'm glad to hear it worked!
Thank you so much for your comment!
Great to hear you love this one as well as the agmygdala reference!
It took me a while to find the perfect picture so I'm glad to hear it worked!
Thank you so much for your comment!
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13th Jul 2024 9:47pm
Bowing down to this work of art. Both the pick and the poem. Good luck in comp. Fia xoxo
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14th Jul 2024 7:48am
Thanks heaps for your amazing comment, Fia. xoxo (I knew you would find this one ;-)
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15th Jul 2024 11:15am
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16th Jul 2024 3:12pm
Don't worry, it happens to all of us. Thanks heaps for dropping by and wishing me luck :-)