Nirvana

'   i drift into the
calm of your eye
floating like clouds
 in slow motion '   ... now this is freaking poetic!. . .Lady Duende, your descriptions are inimitable and profound. . .love to you, Lady. . .~Devlin.

Lady Devlin, you always amaze me with your comments!

Freaking poetic and inimitable... I can't ask for more :-)

Gratitude and Love to you, Duende

Love your word use here.  Nice read.

Thank you so much!
Glad to hear you enjoyed it :-)

"your baritone
bursts in my brain
morphing every
cell with the
magic phrase"

I love a man that can send us to that place with just the sound of their voice..

sizzling erotic lovely Duende..

love Crim

Thank you so much, Crim!

Yes, nothing can beat a voice, so important!
When it's right (intonation, warmth) it can put me in a trance...

Love, Duende

"   I AM

Painfully aware
of your Power"

Love that line!
Such a strong write.

Thank you for commenting and calling it a strong write!
I like that you've chosen those lines to highlight, because Power was of course a strong theme in the poem ;-)

Thank you!
Glad you enjoyed it...

'i drift into the
 calm of your eye
floating like clouds
  in slow motion '

So amazing!

Thank you so much, Kasai!

What a pleasure it is to read this poem...thank you :-)

Thank you so much for your comment!

Glad to hear you enjoyed it :-)

Wow... what a comment!

If you were trying to make my day, you have :-)

It feels like a storm when strong feelings wash over you. I think you used the metaphor well. The little breaks that punctuate the piece: I AM, Start Counting, and ~sweet obliviion~ are like thunder crashes as the poem rains down. The allusion to a circle, the visual eye of the storm, as your last stanza is a nice touch. As with much of your writing, you've got some nice sounds going on with your words.

"As with much of your writing, you've got some nice sounds going on with your words" > thank you so much for mentioning that! Since I learned about 'sounds' I try to incorporate that in my work, I just love it!

I'm happy you got the 'eye' in the last stanza and think I used the metaphor well! That's what started this poem... it's such a fascinating concept!

Thunder crashes... I never looked at it that way, but I like it ;-)

Thank your for sharing your view on this piece!

My woman I just want to quote
your existence here.. every
verse and line.. .

this one settled within my regions
something beautiful,

ow!



-Howlings

My Noire,

How can I respond to such an amazing comment?
I will leave it at: lost for words...

Thank you so much!
Duende