deepundergroundpoetry.com
~Winter's Last Kiss~with diamonddave75
Winter's demon hunted
with a snarl on her lips
and ice tipped fangs
she tasted the day
feral in her ways
the scent of man flesh
thick in the air
lost in wilderness
a lone traveler
weary and worn
pale trees
guardians of the forest
watch over him
frozen in silence
fearing for his fate
she is a cruel seductress
this cold lady dark
dulling the senses
with her cool embrace
he feels a chill along his spine
catching a movement along the tree line
seeing her for the first time
he can't help but be captivated
her dark mesmerizing eyes
lulling him into a false sense of security
snow-blind
falling down
a silhouette
of hope reaches out
falling into her arms
please, help me
eyes meet
flesh so warm
her fingers
so sensual
shedding clothes
his pulse feeds her
melting something in her
she wants to keep him
her hunger and desire
for his strong form
stirs her blackened heart
Winter's laws are clear
she knows this can't be
keening from sorrow and rage
she lashes out at the man
eviscerating him
he speaks to her lovingly
while slowly bleeding out
touching her lips
he whispers "For All Eternity"
she bends down and kisses him
"until then my love"
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 17th Aug 2016
| Edited 18th Aug 2016
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 17
reading list entries 2
comments 37
reads 1031
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Re. ~Winter's Last Kiss~with diamondave75
Anonymous
17th Aug 2016 11:10pm
Brenda.. always an honor, lovely one.. i truly love this write.. especially the time, and heart we put into it.. a beautiful experience.. thank you my dearest friend.. i love you always..
Dave
Dave
1
Re: Re. ~Winter's Last Kiss~with diamondave75
18th Aug 2016 00:16am
it was truly my pleasure Dave writing with you made my day thank you :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. ~Winter's Last Kiss~with diamonddave75
17th Aug 2016 11:15pm
A very dark, intensely vivid depiction...that achin' of mutuality of souls on the quest for eternal love... Outstanding work you two! :)
1
Re: Re. ~Winter's Last Kiss~with diamonddave75
18th Aug 2016 00:17am
Re. ~Winter's Last Kiss~with diamonddave75
17th Aug 2016 11:17pm
You two are fucking splendid!
I love this my lady loves & dearest man,
-Howlings
I love this my lady loves & dearest man,
-Howlings
1
Re: Re. ~Winter's Last Kiss~with diamonddave75
18th Aug 2016 00:17am
Re. ~Winter's Last Kiss~with diamonddave75
I met her sister . . Long fingers, with sharpened talons
which she used to take me to heaven even though she
was a witch from hell. I put up with her much, much longer
that I should have, because of those fingers and the heaven
she made for me was worth it. Almost!
which she used to take me to heaven even though she
was a witch from hell. I put up with her much, much longer
that I should have, because of those fingers and the heaven
she made for me was worth it. Almost!
1
Re: Re. ~Winter's Last Kiss~with diamonddave75
18th Aug 2016 00:19am
thank you Jerry sound like a good time could be a poem in it for you possibly if you haven't already written of the she devil ;)
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. ~Winter's Last Kiss~with diamonddave75
18th Aug 2016 00:58am
Eh . . . Yes I wrote three poems about her and lost all of them when my computer crashed, and just haven't have the desire to try and re-create them. Thank you very much, Brenda for you checking out my poem.
1
Re: Re. ~Winter's Last Kiss~with diamonddave75
18th Aug 2016 1:04am
Re. ~Winter's Last Kiss~with diamonddave75
Anonymous
18th Aug 2016 1:58am
Wowzers Crim & Diamond......you two are always awesome together......I so enjoyed this visual heart touching write......felt like I was there with you......great choice of pic......purple luv & hugs xo :)
1
Re: Re. ~Winter's Last Kiss~with diamonddave75
18th Aug 2016 3:02am
Re. ~Winter's Last Kiss~with diamonddave75
18th Aug 2016 2:17am
As a man who gravitates towards women with an aggressive edge, I so appreciated this write. It caused me to visualize an Amur leopard stalking her prey through the cold Korean snow. In a scene that would be worthy of 'Cat People,' when she finds a lost soldier boy, instead of eating him, she mates with him.
2
Re: Re. ~Winter's Last Kiss~with diamonddave75
Re. ~Winter's Last Kiss~with diamonddave75
Anonymous
18th Aug 2016 3:30am
This is such a fierce, passionate piece!
Absolutely love it! 💓
Amazing job, you two. 😘
Absolutely love it! 💓
Amazing job, you two. 😘
1
Re: Re. ~Winter's Last Kiss~with diamonddave75
18th Aug 2016 3:57am
Re. ~Winter's Last Kiss~with diamonddave75
18th Aug 2016 4:37am
Re: Re. ~Winter's Last Kiss~with diamonddave75
18th Aug 2016 1:41pm
Re. ~Winter's Last Kiss~with diamonddave75
Anonymous
18th Aug 2016 4:40am
Absolutely kicks ass! Passion at its best. Both of you on your own write this well.
It's a Storm when you two write {❇⚡⚡❇}
Trish 💋
It's a Storm when you two write {❇⚡⚡❇}
Trish 💋
1
Re: Re. ~Winter's Last Kiss~with diamonddave75
18th Aug 2016 1:42pm
thank you graciously from us both lovely Trisha you made my morning :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. ~Winter's Last Kiss~with diamonddave75
18th Aug 2016 7:16am
Re: Re. ~Winter's Last Kiss~with diamonddave75
18th Aug 2016 1:43pm
Re: Re. ~Winter's Last Kiss~with diamonddave75
22nd Nov 2022 3:07pm
Felt like picking a random poem of yours. And this caught my eye. Though seems I've read it once apon a time hehe. Brings back old times. Glad I revisited this piece. You truly have montines of great reads.
1
Re: Re. ~Winter's Last Kiss~with diamonddave75
22nd Nov 2022 3:14pm
thank you graciously from us both DC it's a trip looking over my old writes I miss Dave I'm glad you are still here with me 💕
Re: Re. ~Winter's Last Kiss~with diamonddave75
22nd Nov 2022 3:21pm
I miss Dave and so many others. Not sure why I'm here some times. Guess I'll be here as long as I feel the need to write, or my hands get cut off. The ladder is more likely hehe 😁
Glad to see you are still here as well. Not too many from the dark days left.
Glad to see you are still here as well. Not too many from the dark days left.
1
Re. ~Winter's Last Kiss~with diamonddave75
18th Aug 2016 7:28am
Such a dark and passionate write, love it!
You two are a poetic match made in heaven!!!
Love, Duende
You two are a poetic match made in heaven!!!
Love, Duende
1
Re: Re. ~Winter's Last Kiss~with diamonddave75
18th Aug 2016 1:44pm
Re. ~Winter's Last Kiss~with diamonddave75
18th Aug 2016 2:05pm
Fantastic collaboration. Y'all made everything seem so alive.
I could actually feel Winter's longing and her bite.
Love this example of how that which is so beautiful holds such danger for the unwary
I could actually feel Winter's longing and her bite.
Love this example of how that which is so beautiful holds such danger for the unwary
1
Re: Re. ~Winter's Last Kiss~with diamonddave75
18th Aug 2016 2:24pm
yes Winter can be deadly.. thank you most graciously from us both :)
love Crim
love Crim
Re. ~Winter's Last Kiss~with diamonddave75
18th Aug 2016 2:25pm
There are some poets who just seem to fit within each other.
You two are two of them. The write is seemless in voice unification,
combining dark and erotic from the two into one.
You two are two of them. The write is seemless in voice unification,
combining dark and erotic from the two into one.
1
Re: Re. ~Winter's Last Kiss~with diamonddave75
18th Aug 2016 2:32pm
thank you most graciously from us both Sage one.. we talked out this write with each other on FB we've written together before but this is the first time we really worked it out getting into the minds of our characters I'm so happy it came across..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. ~Winter's Last Kiss~with diamonddave75
18th Aug 2016 6:00pm
Re: Re. ~Winter's Last Kiss~with diamonddave75
19th Aug 2016 3:56am
Re. ~Winter's Last Kiss~with diamonddave75
18th Aug 2016 11:38pm
Winter's laws are much too harsh. This is tragic but deeply beautiful, pure magic from you both. Loved this!
1
Re: Re. ~Winter's Last Kiss~with diamonddave75
19th Aug 2016 3:57am
Re. ~Winter's Last Kiss~with diamonddave75
9th Jun 2018 7:50pm
Re: Re. ~Winter's Last Kiss~with diamonddave75
9th Jun 2018 7:54pm
thank you dearest Tim from us both graciously if you'd like a link to our serial killer series I'm sure Dave would be happy to link you..
love Brenda
love Brenda