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fuck heroism..it's just what the heart wants!
they said the ocean swell
will be seven meters tonight
it is dark and it's raining
heart's pleading me to go
fuck heroism
it's just what it wants
and
that's where it's leading
imagine the cold winds
and the chilly spray
a tiny speck of a dinghy
heading the opposite way
there's beauty in pitch black
and an ocean full of life
the rise and fall of swell
is truly a rhythm divine
the beauty is beyond words
it is rather irresistible
rationale and sanity?
well, they too can join in!
fuck heroism
it's just what the heart wants
and that's exactly
where it's leading!
© KDAmB 2016. All rights reserved.
Published 3rd Aug 2016
| Edited 5th Aug 2016
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3rd Aug 2016 10:19am
Just being honest, I wasn't to fond of this piece, a bit lackluster from what I've come to expect... Nah I'm kidding.
"the beauty is beyond words
it's rather irresistible
rationale and sanity
well, they too can join in!"
Loved that stanza. Great pen!
~anonshadow😏
"the beauty is beyond words
it's rather irresistible
rationale and sanity
well, they too can join in!"
Loved that stanza. Great pen!
~anonshadow😏
3rd Aug 2016 10:37am
welcome dear AnonShadow! well..I agree.. even if it was true... was in no mood to fine tune or anything..just let the heart dictate..and when you do that..the mind goes and hides in a dunny...Thanks for your kind appreciation.. just loving the high winds and severe weather that's here right now and is expected for the next few days...
Cheers!
KDAmB
Cheers!
KDAmB
3rd Aug 2016 11:29am
It's never honest if we don't let it
have it's way.. .
I felt as if I were a deafening
duel, between your mind and heart.
Powerful battle and bits
-Howlings
have it's way.. .
I felt as if I were a deafening
duel, between your mind and heart.
Powerful battle and bits
-Howlings
3rd Aug 2016 11:43am
Awwe MsWhelms...how can I ever thank you?! agree 100% it's never honest if we don't let it have it's way...
Your kind appreciation always means a lot to this dabbler..Thank You once again!
Cheers!
KDAmB
Your kind appreciation always means a lot to this dabbler..Thank You once again!
Cheers!
KDAmB
Anonymous
3rd Aug 2016 12:35pm
The title alone had my attention!
I love the imagery, and how it pulled me in, wanting me to be right there.
Very well done!
I love the imagery, and how it pulled me in, wanting me to be right there.
Very well done!
3rd Aug 2016 12:44pm
Thank You MsWTH... am glad you saw what I meant and I thank you for your generous appreciation and visit!!
Cheers!
KDAmB
Cheers!
KDAmB
3rd Aug 2016 4:34pm
"there's beauty in pitch black
and an ocean full of life"
Yes indeed, my friend. You can find beauty
there if you understand what you are searching for.
and an ocean full of life"
Yes indeed, my friend. You can find beauty
there if you understand what you are searching for.
3rd Aug 2016 4:37pm
Awwe..Jerry you honor me with your visit and comment... thank You for both... and yes there is beauty and heart knows what it's looking for..
4th Aug 2016 9:39pm
4th Aug 2016 10:41pm
Thank You brother.. Your visit always brings a smile to my face! It means a lot, your presence and appreciation! Thank You!!
5th Aug 2016 5:02pm
Great flow and ending!
"fuck heroism
it's just what the heart wants
and that's exactly
where it's leading!"
I like where you chose to use exclamations!
"fuck heroism
it's just what the heart wants
and that's exactly
where it's leading!"
I like where you chose to use exclamations!
5th Aug 2016 5:06pm
Welcome Artemois... Thank You for the very kind compliment. Appreciate your gesture and visit. I am glad you saw the expressions in this expression...Thank you once again...
regards
KDAmB
regards
KDAmB
Anonymous
6th Aug 2016 2:59pm
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6th Aug 2016 3:06pm
No matey I don't...i wish I did...but surfing the net ain't that bad either...you dodge some big monsters here too bro.... thanks bro... am glad you liked and appreciate your kind appreciation brah! ;-)
Cheers!
KDAmB
Cheers!
KDAmB
7th Aug 2016 3:08am
I love storms - I love to go out in them - had some good electrical storms the past few nights - not sure if it is heroics that drives me out to meet those storms or foolhardiness - but them there is a very thin line between heroic and stupidity :-)
excellent write, good thought provoking ink :-)
excellent write, good thought provoking ink :-)
7th Aug 2016 10:59am
Yes...Dave..can't believe how glad I am to know that you too love the storms.. well somone's hero is someone's stupid...depending on who you ask..but for us..it's simply following what the heart wants.. always brings a big grin your feedback Dave! honored to call you a friend!! Thank You sincerely!!
KDAmB
KDAmB
