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INSATIABLE
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He wonders what she hides behind
that mischievous smile, and the
crescent wile of curvaceous skin.
The little black dress that shows
what's hidden from within, and artful
hands that tender its sin,
of how her eyes can melt his soul,
black gems that glitter, flash and burn,
and make him yearn for tangled limbs.
His lover's mouth with its hunger,
insatiable until it's done.
Her body's desire renders its pureness,
oiling his with her serpent's move,
slick from the whiteness of him.
Moonlit gleam of heavy eyes, a shudder
and a rush of sighs when a tongue curls in.
Her grin, and the joy felt within by her
lover's unexpected turn;
to start the kiss anew, to rise again and
quench her needy thirst as the cycle repeats
till passion wanes and lulls them in
a slow-motion sleep.
Where did that little black dress go?
Her dreamy smile won't let him know,
though the setting moon will take a peek
with notions of its own.
.
He wonders what she hides behind
that mischievous smile, and the
crescent wile of curvaceous skin.
The little black dress that shows
what's hidden from within, and artful
hands that tender its sin,
of how her eyes can melt his soul,
black gems that glitter, flash and burn,
and make him yearn for tangled limbs.
His lover's mouth with its hunger,
insatiable until it's done.
Her body's desire renders its pureness,
oiling his with her serpent's move,
slick from the whiteness of him.
Moonlit gleam of heavy eyes, a shudder
and a rush of sighs when a tongue curls in.
Her grin, and the joy felt within by her
lover's unexpected turn;
to start the kiss anew, to rise again and
quench her needy thirst as the cycle repeats
till passion wanes and lulls them in
a slow-motion sleep.
Where did that little black dress go?
Her dreamy smile won't let him know,
though the setting moon will take a peek
with notions of its own.
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Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 1st Aug 2016
| Edited 22nd Sep 2017
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Re. INSATIABLE
1st Aug 2016 10:41am
Not typically one for erotic but this was quite well done, simply dripping with passion. Great as usual Jade.
~anonshadow😏
~anonshadow😏
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1st Aug 2016 10:52am
Why thank you, anon. I'm so glad you took a chance and came over for a read, and a share that brings me a very late night/early morning (2:50am) smile of gratitude.
-Jadey🎏
-Jadey🎏
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11th Jan 2020 5:50am
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1st Aug 2016 12:52pm
A most delectable and sensuous read... Oh... The little black dress...
geoff
geoff
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2nd Aug 2016 10:46pm
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1st Aug 2016 1:35pm
Amazing words flowing in a beautiful rhythm!
I especially loved this piece:
Her body's desire renders its pureness,
oiling his with her serpent's move,
slick from the whiteness of him.
I especially loved this piece:
Her body's desire renders its pureness,
oiling his with her serpent's move,
slick from the whiteness of him.
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Thank you so much, dear Duende, for coming by to read & embrace my write. I also welcome you to DUP.
RL gratitude🎏
RL gratitude🎏
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Anonymous
1st Aug 2016 1:39pm
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1st Aug 2016 2:03pm
And where did my mind go? ;)
beautiful and as delicate as
that black dress painted upon
her yet gone before his eyes.
what a to start noon, love this
my lady.
-Howlings
beautiful and as delicate as
that black dress painted upon
her yet gone before his eyes.
what a to start noon, love this
my lady.
-Howlings
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1st Aug 2016 11:07pm
Thank you my darling Howlings, your words to me about my craft have often been as poetry itself that you've written just for me. How special you always make me feel.
ever
Jade🍃
ever
Jade🍃
Re. INSATIABLE
1st Aug 2016 5:44pm
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1st Aug 2016 11:10pm
Thank you, friend LBV, where once again you display such appreciation for my humble offerings.
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Anonymous
1st Aug 2016 5:54pm
Jade,
Love when wonders lead to desires quenched. Enjoyed!
tornado
Love when wonders lead to desires quenched. Enjoyed!
tornado
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1st Aug 2016 11:12pm
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Anonymous
1st Aug 2016 8:05pm
A very delicious, sensual piece.
Drips of beautiful eroticism.
Very much enjoyed.
Drips of beautiful eroticism.
Very much enjoyed.
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1st Aug 2016 11:20pm
Thank you, dear Heart, for coming over to see me, and read & embrace my little piece. I'm so glad, and I warmly welcome you!
ever
Jade🌿
ever
Jade🌿
Re. INSATIABLE
1st Aug 2016 9:55pm
I love all the hunger and passion, but I fixate on that little black dress and its whereabouts. That's a sweet detail to otherwise powerful work:
'of how her eyes can melt his soul,
black gems that glitter, flash and burn,
and make him yearn for tangled limbs"
Think I'll forget the dress and go for the tangled limbs. Excellent work Jade!
'of how her eyes can melt his soul,
black gems that glitter, flash and burn,
and make him yearn for tangled limbs"
Think I'll forget the dress and go for the tangled limbs. Excellent work Jade!
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1st Aug 2016 11:35pm
appreciative laugh
Aah dear friend crowfly, my little write has created a delicious conflict for you which is a happy one as well. Thank you for always sharing with me!
always
Jadey🍃
Aah dear friend crowfly, my little write has created a delicious conflict for you which is a happy one as well. Thank you for always sharing with me!
always
Jadey🍃
Re. INSATIABLE
2nd Aug 2016 00:13am
This is the second poem I've read today titled 'Insatiable'. Both very different... yet sensual in content. I love the subtle tenderness with hints of fire burning passion across the page, Jade. :)
Sexy Pen~
Sexy Pen~
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Thank you, dear Tara, your embrace & share are most special to me, as is your enjoyment. And yes, most times, erotica I write is subtle when it comes to my poetry.
ever
Jade xo
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Jade xo
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2nd Aug 2016 6:58am
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2nd Aug 2016 8:40am
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2nd Aug 2016 10:18am
now this is sultry mental foreplay
at its best
no question Jade!!
the mood...
...the mood reeks all over this vibe!!
wooo!
at its best
no question Jade!!
the mood...
...the mood reeks all over this vibe!!
wooo!
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2nd Aug 2016 7:56pm
Aah thank you, Naajir, for this exuberant share; it's such a lovely embrace!
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4th Aug 2016 5:16pm
This is simply erotica done right. Filled with passion and raw animal wanting. It's a rhythmic delight Jadey.
John
John
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5th Aug 2016 12:56pm
I'm so glad to know of your enjoyment, John, and thank you for such a lovely nod to the piece.
ever
Jadey
ever
Jadey