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Vague
Pulling my hair
Gritting my teeth
Hugging my knees
Moaning in fear
Alcohol eclipse
Twisted reflection
Verbal disclosure
Flashing back and wince
Guilt, shame and betrayal
Fixed with a little more
Rounding off the edge
Curled up tightly fetal
Chirp the sound of daylight
Phone calls rejected
Voice mail box full
Blue flickers the cell light
Wash my face and hands
Clense my embarrassment
Erase my brain
Cover me in sand
I'm sorry.
Gritting my teeth
Hugging my knees
Moaning in fear
Alcohol eclipse
Twisted reflection
Verbal disclosure
Flashing back and wince
Guilt, shame and betrayal
Fixed with a little more
Rounding off the edge
Curled up tightly fetal
Chirp the sound of daylight
Phone calls rejected
Voice mail box full
Blue flickers the cell light
Wash my face and hands
Clense my embarrassment
Erase my brain
Cover me in sand
I'm sorry.
Published 30th Jul 2016
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30th Jul 2016 9:16pm
aww.... I think I get it. Remorse, guilt the day after....?! I love the way you displayed your emotions in such a snap by snap frame. Beautifully done!
7th Aug 2016 4:24am
Thank you for reading, responding and liking my poem. I feel so honoured when a fellow writer leaves feedback; good or with helpful criticism.
Cheers!
Cheers!
30th Jul 2016 9:42pm
Very intense...you expressed yourself very well. Hugs for your soul
Willow
Willow
7th Aug 2016 4:26am
31st Jul 2016 4:03am
7th Aug 2016 4:33am
Thank you for your comment. This was a time in my life when I became self-distructive. I was in my 20s, newly married and found out my husband had cancer.
31st Jul 2016 8:14pm
There is no soul-wrench like that of regret.
Forgiving ourselves is the most difficult.
Well conveyed.
Forgiving ourselves is the most difficult.
Well conveyed.
7th Aug 2016 4:36am
Thank you. I'm not sure if we truly forgive ourselves but move on with regrets. Most importantly, we learn.
Cheers
Cheers
7th Aug 2016 4:39am
Thank you. I'm not sure if we truly forgive ourselves but move on with regrets. Most importantly, we learn.
Cheers
Cheers
7th Aug 2016 6:12pm
Total forgiveness here.
I realized everything was
teacher and I enrolled
in the class. Good teachers
seem to be the hardest.
I am sorry about your
husband.
I realized everything was
teacher and I enrolled
in the class. Good teachers
seem to be the hardest.
I am sorry about your
husband.
21st Aug 2016 6:11am
Life is just to short. Holding on to the past will only stop you from having a possibility of tomorrow.
Thanks for reading.
Cheers +
Thanks for reading.
Cheers +
Anonymous
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21st Aug 2016 6:16am
I appreciate your comment.
If you grew up in the Era when social meant "cocktail " and not media, I know you related.
Lol..Cheers
If you grew up in the Era when social meant "cocktail " and not media, I know you related.
Lol..Cheers
21st Aug 2016 6:16am
I appreciate your comment.
If you grew up in the Era when social meant "cocktail " and not media, I know you related.
Lol..Cheers
If you grew up in the Era when social meant "cocktail " and not media, I know you related.
Lol..Cheers
