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MESSENGER
Will you cross the state line with me
There are other lines more ancient
Ley lines and horizons set by other suns
To know beginnings is sufficient
A word sown
And the word was hung
12 above 24
The room between your ears
Is the only room that exists
Until the door beneath the arch is opened
21 above 42
A bird flew in the open window
And fought itself in the mirror
And exhausted fell into the fire
24 above 12
The angry crowd of the thorny crown
Only feels self pity
Not the wretchedness of true misery
Not the parch razors of waterlessness
Not the bloat of stomach on an empty road
Nor love without return
Show me where the Bible says
Sheep will lay down with lion
Transcend sheep and lion become
What faces do you see in the light
What faces in the dark
Are they not amongst us
Hate me if you must or worse
For I am but a messenger
And this but my verse
There are other lines more ancient
Ley lines and horizons set by other suns
To know beginnings is sufficient
A word sown
And the word was hung
12 above 24
The room between your ears
Is the only room that exists
Until the door beneath the arch is opened
21 above 42
A bird flew in the open window
And fought itself in the mirror
And exhausted fell into the fire
24 above 12
The angry crowd of the thorny crown
Only feels self pity
Not the wretchedness of true misery
Not the parch razors of waterlessness
Not the bloat of stomach on an empty road
Nor love without return
Show me where the Bible says
Sheep will lay down with lion
Transcend sheep and lion become
What faces do you see in the light
What faces in the dark
Are they not amongst us
Hate me if you must or worse
For I am but a messenger
And this but my verse
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Re. MESSENGER
28th Jul 2016 6:56am
whale, I must and must sit here with this one
for a while
only to return with a clearer complimenting
compass
Wow, this is.. .refining
-Howlings
for a while
only to return with a clearer complimenting
compass
Wow, this is.. .refining
-Howlings
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28th Jul 2016 8:48am
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28th Jul 2016 7:57am
it's a sad thing to give such beauty
to us, who hunger for poetry;
& still we search for hate.
or worse...
to us, who hunger for poetry;
& still we search for hate.
or worse...
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"Not the parch razors of waterlessness"
"A bird flew in the open window
And fought itself in the mirror
And exhausted fell into the fire"
"To know beginnings is sufficient
A word sown
And the word was hung "
These words are very meaningful...
Outstanding write overall, thanks for sharing and guiding me to them. I'd like to hear the story behind you writing this if you want to send me a PM
Don't forget to share your love every day as much as you can no matter how small and effort... -the universe
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"A bird flew in the open window
And fought itself in the mirror
And exhausted fell into the fire"
"To know beginnings is sufficient
A word sown
And the word was hung "
These words are very meaningful...
Outstanding write overall, thanks for sharing and guiding me to them. I'd like to hear the story behind you writing this if you want to send me a PM
Don't forget to share your love every day as much as you can no matter how small and effort... -the universe
-ed
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hey thanks Fenom - one ripple of love creates a tsunami of change - thanks for sharing yours
As for my story it is long and best told in verse as I myself uncover it
As for my story it is long and best told in verse as I myself uncover it
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28th Jul 2016 9:46am
You are already on the path to restoring balance where it's needed, brother. I was only making sure you knew...
Thanks for your love...
-the universe
Thanks for your love...
-the universe
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28th Jul 2016 10:30am
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This is a jewel in the crown of enlightenment, Brother.
Many messengers are sacrificed for truth, aren't they.
Thank you so much for sharing.
Many messengers are sacrificed for truth, aren't they.
Thank you so much for sharing.
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28th Jul 2016 4:00pm
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28th Jul 2016 2:58pm
Whale my mind is spinning at the wonder of this being accountable for each word you've brought it enlightening all!
opening doors and windows of the mind outstanding..
love Brenda
opening doors and windows of the mind outstanding..
love Brenda
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28th Jul 2016 4:04pm
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29th Jul 2016 1:04am
12 above 24, reversing the numbers and repeat, simply heightened your message with wonderment and intensity. Wowed!
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29th Jul 2016 5:50am
Hey Rain - really great to see you here and much appreciate your accomplishments and comments
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29th Jul 2016 8:01am
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30th Jul 2016 12:13pm
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31st Jul 2016 4:07am
This poem bares my soul and it's darkest secrets. It's helping change my life...
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1st Aug 2016 2:15am
The Cornerstone having been
rejected contrarily became
the Chief Cornerstone.
And the ironic part of it all is
that the One they rejected in
physical form, (this plain of
existence, as it's subjective
anyways), is the One that
they wrote and Prophesied
and breathed the coming
of into, while through and
under the influence of the
Ruach although of course.
But they created - so to speak -
their own deliverance - HaMeshiach -
and then couldn't abide it.
rejected contrarily became
the Chief Cornerstone.
And the ironic part of it all is
that the One they rejected in
physical form, (this plain of
existence, as it's subjective
anyways), is the One that
they wrote and Prophesied
and breathed the coming
of into, while through and
under the influence of the
Ruach although of course.
But they created - so to speak -
their own deliverance - HaMeshiach -
and then couldn't abide it.
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1st Aug 2016 1:33am
"The room between your ears
Is the only room that exists
Until the door beneath the arch
is opened"
This is Profound Enlightenment
Whale.
The Arch, (Golden Arch), giving
access into the deeper waters
that are above the Firmament
and not below.
The waters that were/are above
the Firmament are separated/
divided.
There are those who remain in
the waters below the Firmament
and those who pierce the Veil and
Ascend into the Waters above the
Firmament.
Ezekiel also saw this in his vision
of the Waters.
Through the Doorway of perception
we transcend into the Higher Realms.
Is the only room that exists
Until the door beneath the arch
is opened"
This is Profound Enlightenment
Whale.
The Arch, (Golden Arch), giving
access into the deeper waters
that are above the Firmament
and not below.
The waters that were/are above
the Firmament are separated/
divided.
There are those who remain in
the waters below the Firmament
and those who pierce the Veil and
Ascend into the Waters above the
Firmament.
Ezekiel also saw this in his vision
of the Waters.
Through the Doorway of perception
we transcend into the Higher Realms.
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Anonymous
1st Aug 2016 3:50am
[The room between your ears
Is the only room that exists
Until the door beneath the arch is opened]
^^ so profound that i can't even wrap my head around the whole poem.
Whale, you've written some exception pieces but i must admit this left me speechless.
Is the only room that exists
Until the door beneath the arch is opened]
^^ so profound that i can't even wrap my head around the whole poem.
Whale, you've written some exception pieces but i must admit this left me speechless.
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1st Aug 2016 7:01pm
Oh Vee - very kind appreciation for work that was more inspired unto rather than written by me
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Anonymous
5th Sep 2016 10:25pm
How many worlds ..... ?
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