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River of Life
Like the ocean she is dark
keeping her depths a secret
too painful for eyes to see
Like the sea she is seducing
dancing between eb and flow
tempting with all her waves
Like water she is delicate
kissing with lips of devotion
her flavor soft and sweet
Like waterfalls she is strong
cascading into valleys of gold
where rainbows fill her soul
Like cleansing rain she cries
washing away her memories
of a dashed and broken life
Like fiery rivers she bleeds
carrying the burden of being
through the fields of eternity
Like tiny rivulets she streams
surrendering to the flow of life
her destination is still unknown
keeping her depths a secret
too painful for eyes to see
Like the sea she is seducing
dancing between eb and flow
tempting with all her waves
Like water she is delicate
kissing with lips of devotion
her flavor soft and sweet
Like waterfalls she is strong
cascading into valleys of gold
where rainbows fill her soul
Like cleansing rain she cries
washing away her memories
of a dashed and broken life
Like fiery rivers she bleeds
carrying the burden of being
through the fields of eternity
Like tiny rivulets she streams
surrendering to the flow of life
her destination is still unknown
Published 27th Jul 2016
| Edited 18th Oct 2024
Author's Note
Zimmer - Now We Are Free.
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27th Jul 2016 7:40am
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Anonymous
3rd Aug 2016 4:56am
Beautiful write.. welcome to DU..
Dave
Dave
4th Aug 2016 10:42am
2nd Sep 2016 00:35am
2nd Sep 2016 3:14am
20th Sep 2016 2:27pm
As I go back to the beginning of the over 500 or so poems I've posted. I pick and peek between all the sexy and erotic (which is me as well) find my soul in many of the other things I've composed. My autobiography......
......this almost reads like the preface of a still beautiful life, enticing me to read more. Awaiting the book : )
......this almost reads like the preface of a still beautiful life, enticing me to read more. Awaiting the book : )
20th Sep 2016 2:46pm
Thank you for commenting on the first poem I posted, I truly appreciate that!
Autobiography... yes, I think that's what we do in our poems... revealing ourselves piece by piece! I think the more you read of me (in the future) the more you will see a theme...
I'm gonna read more of your self poems for sure :-)
Autobiography... yes, I think that's what we do in our poems... revealing ourselves piece by piece! I think the more you read of me (in the future) the more you will see a theme...
I'm gonna read more of your self poems for sure :-)
20th Sep 2016 2:53pm
.....and I love the introit to the soundtrack of your life #ilovehanszimmer
20th Sep 2016 3:05pm
Me too :-)
Had to look up introit (my vocabulairy increases here by the day) but yes... I thought it would make a great start!
Had to look up introit (my vocabulairy increases here by the day) but yes... I thought it would make a great start!
4th Oct 2016 00:45am
Reads of such hope.
You are a excellent poet. A wonderful woman deep down. Never forget that 😁
❤️️
You are a excellent poet. A wonderful woman deep down. Never forget that 😁
❤️️
4th Oct 2016 1:40pm
You make me smile... and you make me blush...
Thank you for your comment and taking her home :-)
It's funny... I can see now how much my style has changed, glad you like this 'oldie' too!
Thank you for seeing me ♥
Thank you for your comment and taking her home :-)
It's funny... I can see now how much my style has changed, glad you like this 'oldie' too!
Thank you for seeing me ♥
13th Nov 2016 5:33pm
The intensity of emotion seemed to ascend as I read on.
Like cleansing rain she cries
washing away her memories
of a dashed and broken life
Like fiery rivers she bleeds
carrying the burden of being
through fields of eternity
Exemplary work my friend!
Like cleansing rain she cries
washing away her memories
of a dashed and broken life
Like fiery rivers she bleeds
carrying the burden of being
through fields of eternity
Exemplary work my friend!
13th Nov 2016 5:55pm
And that was exactly my intention ;-)
Trying to describe the different aspects of my personality, working towards 'destination unknown' (which is a main theme at the moment)
Thank you for seeing me, my friend!
Trying to describe the different aspects of my personality, working towards 'destination unknown' (which is a main theme at the moment)
Thank you for seeing me, my friend!
13th Nov 2016 6:10pm
People have layers. People are generally closed off, particularly, people that don't know us. One thing that I love so much about poets, is our openness, and desire to share the inner-most depths of who we are.
Anonymous
22nd Jan 2017 1:24pm
Life is like a river. Very well put Duende.
22nd Jan 2017 2:33pm
2nd Oct 2018 6:01pm
I love the way your stanzas cascade through the various forms and shapes water takes across the land, like you’re mapping the canals of a beautiful and mysterious soul. There’s a pretty and serene melancholy throughout; Medinda wrote a piece called “Oceans” that used similar methods to describe the space between people in a relationship, it almost could be a companion piece or a sequel to this
2nd Oct 2018 6:12pm
Still discovering my roots, I see :-)
This has indeed a certain melancholy in it, but so do I and even though it's old, it's still very me! Are you referring to a poem or a song with "Oceans"?
Thank you for taking the time to read me, it means a lot!
This has indeed a certain melancholy in it, but so do I and even though it's old, it's still very me! Are you referring to a poem or a song with "Oceans"?
Thank you for taking the time to read me, it means a lot!
2nd Oct 2018 10:43pm
verse 2 swept me away with the eb and flow
" Like the sea she is seducing
dancing between eb and flow
tempting with all her waves
verse 4 took me to Egypt with the valley of the kings
"cascading into valleys of gold
where rainbows fill her soul "
you took me to the river styx and beyond, well penned, keep'em coming.
" Like the sea she is seducing
dancing between eb and flow
tempting with all her waves
verse 4 took me to Egypt with the valley of the kings
"cascading into valleys of gold
where rainbows fill her soul "
you took me to the river styx and beyond, well penned, keep'em coming.
3rd Oct 2018 3:16pm
Thank you so much for commenting, samael
Glad and honored to have brought you to the river Styx and beyond :-)
Glad and honored to have brought you to the river Styx and beyond :-)
Anonymous
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20th Apr 2019 3:03pm
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21st Apr 2019 9:30am
It was indeed my 1000th day on DUP :-))
I like to do that too... go to someone's first poem. I will reply to every comment in the next few days (not at once) Don't worry... your enthusiasm is amazing. Thank you so much for binge reading me, it truly means a lot!
I like to do that too... go to someone's first poem. I will reply to every comment in the next few days (not at once) Don't worry... your enthusiasm is amazing. Thank you so much for binge reading me, it truly means a lot!
