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Off the Clock
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Your sexual specialty, and mine
will take us to opposite ends
when the time comes.
But we're off the clock
without a second hand,
though it's our hands that linger
with fumbling fingers that
nervously probe and retract
with each gasp and sigh.
It's refreshing to be unsure,
hesitant and halting,
your seek-and-find eyes on me
as I try not to look back too long.
That's how awkwardly pleasant it feels
as we both relearn how to be virgins.
To be surprised:
a string of shivers and thrills,
as if we don't want to already know.
This gives me a delicious place
to writhe around on and into
the catnip of your herbal,
the fur sprouting from your animal.
Even as we both hesitate
the way some first-time lovers do.
The call and response from the heat
of our want, and the give of our wet.
The lazy southern lavishing with
skin's contact of taking our time,
the synchronized movements
and knowing ways
are yet to be established.
.
Your sexual specialty, and mine
will take us to opposite ends
when the time comes.
But we're off the clock
without a second hand,
though it's our hands that linger
with fumbling fingers that
nervously probe and retract
with each gasp and sigh.
It's refreshing to be unsure,
hesitant and halting,
your seek-and-find eyes on me
as I try not to look back too long.
That's how awkwardly pleasant it feels
as we both relearn how to be virgins.
To be surprised:
a string of shivers and thrills,
as if we don't want to already know.
This gives me a delicious place
to writhe around on and into
the catnip of your herbal,
the fur sprouting from your animal.
Even as we both hesitate
the way some first-time lovers do.
The call and response from the heat
of our want, and the give of our wet.
The lazy southern lavishing with
skin's contact of taking our time,
the synchronized movements
and knowing ways
are yet to be established.
.
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 22nd Jul 2016
| Edited 9th Jun 2017
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Re. Off the Clock
Anonymous
22nd Jul 2016 8:49pm
this is uniquely beautiful Jade.
Yes indeed..
Yes indeed..
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Re: Re. Off the Clock
23rd Jul 2016 00:16am
Re. Off the Clock
22nd Jul 2016 8:51pm
"your seek-and-find eyes on me
as I try not to look back too long.
That's how awkwardly pleasant it feels"
I Love that :)
A captivating read, Jade; excellent.
as I try not to look back too long.
That's how awkwardly pleasant it feels"
I Love that :)
A captivating read, Jade; excellent.
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Re: Re. Off the Clock
23rd Jul 2016 00:20am
Sweet Pish, how dear of you for your embrace of my write, and my thanks and gratitude for the recommend. xo!
Re. Off the Clock
Anonymous
22nd Jul 2016 9:44pm
Humbled by the grace of your pen. Always a lady.
Gratitude for Jade🙏
Gratitude for Jade🙏
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Re: Re. Off the Clock
23rd Jul 2016 00:26am
Beautiful Trisha, thank you for more than the honor... and my recommend gratitude to you. xo
-Jadey✨
-Jadey✨
Re. Off the Clock
22nd Jul 2016 9:58pm
Re: Re. Off the Clock
23rd Jul 2016 00:30am
My word, Lobo, this is wonderful support for my little write. Thank you for stopping by for a read and a share.
🎏
🎏
Re. Off the Clock
22nd Jul 2016 11:52pm
Jade,
That's how awkwardly pleasant it feels
as we both relearn how to be virgins.
That was the stanza that floored me... took me right back to those times when every touch and every taste was bone shaking, weak at the knees new! Awkward in an "opening of the universe" sort of way...
Love love love it!
And to the Reading List it goes...
That's how awkwardly pleasant it feels
as we both relearn how to be virgins.
That was the stanza that floored me... took me right back to those times when every touch and every taste was bone shaking, weak at the knees new! Awkward in an "opening of the universe" sort of way...
Love love love it!
And to the Reading List it goes...
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Re. Off the Clock
23rd Jul 2016 00:39am
"back to those times when every touch and every taste was bone shaking, weak at the knees new"
Oh yes Geoffrey! Exactly like that. I knew you'd know.
Recommend gratitude.
-tig🎏
Oh yes Geoffrey! Exactly like that. I knew you'd know.
Recommend gratitude.
-tig🎏
Re. Off the Clock
23rd Jul 2016 1:27am
Re. Off the Clock
23rd Jul 2016 2:34am
Re. Off the Clock
23rd Jul 2016 2:37pm
Your playful fingers on the keyboard and knowing mind have blown my doors off Jade. Truly sensuous. I loved it.
John
John
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Re: Re. Off the Clock
24th Jul 2016 4:37am
Ahh thank you so much, John, for sharing that with me, such a delicious way to describe your reaction!
Wishing you well my friend,
ever
-Jadey
Wishing you well my friend,
ever
-Jadey
Re. Off the Clock
23rd Jul 2016 5:58pm
An awkward seduction can be all the fresher. The smooth approach has it's limits and too often rings false. Better yet if the two loves are on equal footing, similarly wide-eyed and open to adventure.
"the synchronized movements
and knowing ways
are yet to be established."
Who needs the clockwork precision? The knowing can be a yawn between the sheets and otherwise. Love's full of surprises, no? Fine job Jade!
"the synchronized movements
and knowing ways
are yet to be established."
Who needs the clockwork precision? The knowing can be a yawn between the sheets and otherwise. Love's full of surprises, no? Fine job Jade!
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Re. Off the Clock
24th Jul 2016 4:43am
Full of surprises YES!, lovely crowfly!
That's why I enjoyed the write as it came to me... with no rush for precision.
Thank you so much, with recommendation gratitude.
ever
-Jadey
That's why I enjoyed the write as it came to me... with no rush for precision.
Thank you so much, with recommendation gratitude.
ever
-Jadey
Re. Off the Clock
25th Jul 2016 9:38pm
I always find so much beauty in your writings Ms. Jade... Your words just seem to flow as if your wind were endless... Thank you
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Re: Re. Off the Clock
26th Jul 2016 4:27am
Why thank you so much, friend LBV, for the wonderful honor, and for how you embrace my work. I could never ask for better.
Re. Off the Clock
It's simply outstanding poetry. Normally I'd have a few words to say about the word 'that' in the third stanza as it's a word so overused it's sad. Nine times out of ten you can remove it without issue if not improve your flow. You made it work, it was needed and I was very taken aback by -that... ;)
I'm seriously happy to have found your words, you have a gift and I suspect many more...
-ed
I'm seriously happy to have found your words, you have a gift and I suspect many more...
-ed
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Re. Off the Clock
You're making me remove long-time reading list material here...
meaniepants~
meaniepants~
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