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The Pit and the Ceiling Fan
The ceiling fan descends
Slicing ancient flesh
One cut for Sylva
One for Lorraine
One for the mistress who lives down the lane
But appetites are unrequited
Due to meat this stringed with age
Waiting jackals get the scraps
And catch bones tossed so lightly
By lovers quickly moving on
The ceiling fan descends again
Slicing healed flesh
One cut for Constance
One for Charmaine
One for the hell spawn who lives down the lane.
Slicing ancient flesh
One cut for Sylva
One for Lorraine
One for the mistress who lives down the lane
But appetites are unrequited
Due to meat this stringed with age
Waiting jackals get the scraps
And catch bones tossed so lightly
By lovers quickly moving on
The ceiling fan descends again
Slicing healed flesh
One cut for Constance
One for Charmaine
One for the hell spawn who lives down the lane.
Published 19th Jul 2016
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19th Jul 2016 9:07pm
Yikes and ill never ever look at
ceiling fans the same..Lola
Now wanting to sleep with one
eye open upon my ceiling ;)
Hello dearly, this is quite the
unique thriller erotiQue.
Enjoyed!
-Howlings
ceiling fans the same..Lola
Now wanting to sleep with one
eye open upon my ceiling ;)
Hello dearly, this is quite the
unique thriller erotiQue.
Enjoyed!
-Howlings
19th Jul 2016 11:52pm
There is no lack of a pendulum in these un-Gothic'd days.
perhaps a little Stephen King influence...
perhaps a little Stephen King influence...
20th Jul 2016 7:16am
well damn
& there i was thinking
my ceiling fan/sock thingamajig
was pushing limits...
... chills
xo
& there i was thinking
my ceiling fan/sock thingamajig
was pushing limits...
... chills
xo
20th Jul 2016 6:09pm
20th Jul 2016 8:49pm
Anonymous
22nd Jul 2016 1:02am
Wow Crow......I have a fan over my bed.....it won't be turned on ever again....clever ink......purple luv & hugs xo :)
22nd Jul 2016 9:21am
I want to paint a bloody ceiling fan on my ceiling now. Also.. good creepy footsteps kind of cadence you employ here. That's a subtle touch but it keeps the senses on animal mode which is good for ghast-receptivity.
