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A breath of nothing
Nylon stockinged legs
Invisible obstruction
A breath of nothing
Entered snugglebuck's FETISH competition
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6th Jul 2016 11:43pm
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7th Jul 2016 00:23am
Re. A breath of nothing
Anonymous
7th Jul 2016 5:13am
There's something so irresistible and exciting about obstructions, achieving, conquering...the reward most often is in the journey itself.
Talk about breath of fresh air, this is uniquely delicious Miss Chi, I love it!
Talk about breath of fresh air, this is uniquely delicious Miss Chi, I love it!
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Re: Re. A breath of nothing
7th Jul 2016 9:01pm
Thank you, dear Rina. As your poems are as delicate and smooth as silk (with a little bit of Steel Magnolias) You must know a lot about obstructions and breaths of nothing. I appreciate your warm words!
Re. A breath of nothing
7th Jul 2016 5:50am
Re: Re. A breath of nothing
7th Jul 2016 9:02pm
Guess why I wrote it :-).
And you too wrote about stockinged legs :-)!
Thanks a lot Solomon, for the ode again and for your kind comment!
And you too wrote about stockinged legs :-)!
Thanks a lot Solomon, for the ode again and for your kind comment!
Re. A breath of nothing
7th Jul 2016 6:25am
Re: Re. A breath of nothing
7th Jul 2016 9:08pm
You know how much I adore your work - it's tough and sexual and pulls at our heartstrings. I feel honored by your terrific comment. Thank you!
Re. A breath of nothing
7th Jul 2016 9:03am
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7th Jul 2016 9:14pm
Aw, thank you so much, Lobo! Your comment is as seducing as your haikus (and long poems, too) which I absolutely fancy :-)!
Re. A breath of nothing
Anonymous
7th Jul 2016 3:20pm
Miss Chi,
You make it ever the harder to ignore what's behind the curtain!
Enjoyed!!!
tornado
You make it ever the harder to ignore what's behind the curtain!
Enjoyed!!!
tornado
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Re: Re. A breath of nothing
7th Jul 2016 9:15pm
Glad you enjoyed, tornado! Oh, why should you ignore what's behind the curtain?
Spy and enjoy :-)!
Thank you so much!
Spy and enjoy :-)!
Thank you so much!
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8th Jul 2016 8:50am