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"I Love you"
He said "I Love you"
And he gave her a kiss
He said "I Love you"
As he swung his fist
He said "I Love you"
As he kneeled with a ring
He said "I Love you"
As he left her with nothing
He said "I Love you"
Bought her a Cadillac
He said "I Love you"
Called her bitch, and took it back
He said "I Love you"
Every time they made love
He said "I Love you"
But only after he'd cum
He said "I Love you"
And that his only was her
He said "I Love you"
As he told her about her
He said "I Love you"
As she cried, and he screamed
He said "I Love you"
Sometimes I Love you
Really don't mean what it seems...
And he gave her a kiss
He said "I Love you"
As he swung his fist
He said "I Love you"
As he kneeled with a ring
He said "I Love you"
As he left her with nothing
He said "I Love you"
Bought her a Cadillac
He said "I Love you"
Called her bitch, and took it back
He said "I Love you"
Every time they made love
He said "I Love you"
But only after he'd cum
He said "I Love you"
And that his only was her
He said "I Love you"
As he told her about her
He said "I Love you"
As she cried, and he screamed
He said "I Love you"
Sometimes I Love you
Really don't mean what it seems...
Published 3rd Jul 2016
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Anonymous
3rd Jul 2016 11:56pm
And some people blame love for these actions/reactions. To some, this is love. Crazy.
Great write, good use of words cleverly strung together. Could even make a good little demonic rock song out of this.
Great write, good use of words cleverly strung together. Could even make a good little demonic rock song out of this.
4th Jul 2016 2:20am
4th Jul 2016 2:19am
Thank you, a friend of mine was going through this situation and posted about it today. Usually i dont get into people's personal buisness, especially in the matters of love, but I painted this picture for her and posted as a reply on the sly. Hopefully she will see that Love is not a string of words. Or at least not those three in particular. Love and peace to you.
4th Jul 2016 4:08am
4th Jul 2016 6:55am
Thank you, it was a bit rushed, but I felt like she heard my point, all I can hope is that it made her think a bit. Leace and pove, lol.
Anonymous
4th Jul 2016 8:50pm
Thank You David. This is a piece that will touch many. It's has resonated with me.
Peace David
Peace David
5th Jul 2016 00:08am
Thank you, it is a terrible to see love confused with anything else. I am hoping to only know this kind of love by proxy. Love and peace and only the real stuff
Anonymous
4th Jul 2016 2:46pm
three words of truth or trickery...
all in perspective...
interesting spillage ;-) dkruie
all in perspective...
interesting spillage ;-) dkruie
5th Jul 2016 00:05am
Love is a funny creature, sadly one that I have yet to tame. I think it best left wild at this point. But to see it's beauty misused is an atrocious act. Peace and love and real things.
4th Jul 2016 3:05pm
5th Jul 2016 1:21am
You are very welcome! thank you for reading, love and peace 'till you can't tell the difference between each!
