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Gone
Poetry's gone
Flushed away
Washed
Down
The
Drain
I'm bereft
Reft
Riven
Slain
Too much
Other
Occupying
The
Terrain
Of my
Brain
So many
Woes
Black
Holes
Sucking
Inspiration
Like
Leeches
No time
To
Mope
Or
Hope
Just
Cope
Struggle
To
Ope
Seems to
No longer
Come
Easily
Effortlessly
I just
Strain
To
Gain
Mastery
Over
Words
And such
Oh hush!
My mind
Telling
Me
It's
No
Use
Futility
Abstruse
That word
Hmmm...
Hooray!
Mayhap
My mind
Will
Play
Again
Today
Published 15th Jun 2016
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15th Jun 2016 3:42pm
19th Jun 2016 3:18pm
Ahhh, dartford, luv ~
You are a gift and I thank you for being so and bringing your much needed humor to me. :-*
You are a gift and I thank you for being so and bringing your much needed humor to me. :-*
15th Jun 2016 3:52pm
ah lovely one I'm feeling you on this today I too feel bereft I say it will come back round to us :)
love Crim
love Crim
19th Jun 2016 3:27pm
Ahhh, Unveiling, luv ~
I am so glad I could speak to you, though I wish you were not feeling the same.
I'm glad you hold the optimism, luv, for I've been embattled on that front as well. You've brought some hope and I have needed that. Thank you, dark rose. :-*
I am so glad I could speak to you, though I wish you were not feeling the same.
I'm glad you hold the optimism, luv, for I've been embattled on that front as well. You've brought some hope and I have needed that. Thank you, dark rose. :-*
15th Jun 2016 4:25pm
Words are part of your soul, honey. Take care of you. Your words will be back. Love you so much
19th Jun 2016 3:45pm
Thank you, Willow, luv. You've given me a great deal of support over the years and I appreciate it and you.
Thank you for reminding me of how integral words are to me, chica.
Je t'aime, aussi, mon amie. :-*
Thank you for reminding me of how integral words are to me, chica.
Je t'aime, aussi, mon amie. :-*
15th Jun 2016 4:59pm
19th Jun 2016 3:49pm
Blackhyde, luv ~
Thank you so very much for your encouraging words and emoticons. :-D
You are ever a gem. :-*
Thank you so very much for your encouraging words and emoticons. :-D
You are ever a gem. :-*
15th Jun 2016 6:17pm
"Hmmmm
That word"..
Inspiration is wherever you find it...
Enjoyed the mood and flow of this vibe...
That word"..
Inspiration is wherever you find it...
Enjoyed the mood and flow of this vibe...
19th Jun 2016 3:57pm
Ahhh, Naajir, luv ~
Thank you for this reminder regarding inspiration. You are absolutely right, luv, and I am exceedingly grateful that you phrased it precisely as you did.
Tis perfect and mayhap my beleaguered brain will recall this when I am in the sere wastes. :-p I tend tho inhabit them far too oft these days.
Thank you again, luv. :-*
Thank you for this reminder regarding inspiration. You are absolutely right, luv, and I am exceedingly grateful that you phrased it precisely as you did.
Tis perfect and mayhap my beleaguered brain will recall this when I am in the sere wastes. :-p I tend tho inhabit them far too oft these days.
Thank you again, luv. :-*
15th Jun 2016 6:26pm
Inspiration can come at strange times and strange places,a word a phrase can kick start a chain of thoughts that will eventually lead to a poem.
Strong writing, well executed,
Strong writing, well executed,
19th Jun 2016 4:10pm
Ahhh, staggerlee, luv ~
You are so very right on this front and grateful, indeed, I am to you for these words. Betimes, I forget how inspiration comes and your reminder heartens me a great deal, luv.
Thank you ever so much. Indeed, thank you for your praise of my writing as well. I am deeply humbled. :-*
You are so very right on this front and grateful, indeed, I am to you for these words. Betimes, I forget how inspiration comes and your reminder heartens me a great deal, luv.
Thank you ever so much. Indeed, thank you for your praise of my writing as well. I am deeply humbled. :-*
15th Jun 2016 7:44pm
Anonymous
15th Jun 2016 7:50pm
I get caught up, lost in life and estranged to poetry too often too.
It's nice to hear from you , Savaja
especially with such an understandable burden.
well done, glad your mind did play this day.
:) xx
It's nice to hear from you , Savaja
especially with such an understandable burden.
well done, glad your mind did play this day.
:) xx
15th Jun 2016 9:59pm
Savaja, I know exactly how you feel. Brava for putting into flow-like-silk words.
Anonymous
15th Jun 2016 10:26pm
Savaja,
A welcome write this is. Like a sudden drizzle.
Loved the rush of images and words here. This is a stage that is but familiar to mos bitten by the bug. This is at once absorbing, momentary, elevating and true. Love the optimism in the end, akin a phoenix.
More to come..
Phoenix
A welcome write this is. Like a sudden drizzle.
Loved the rush of images and words here. This is a stage that is but familiar to mos bitten by the bug. This is at once absorbing, momentary, elevating and true. Love the optimism in the end, akin a phoenix.
More to come..
Phoenix
15th Jun 2016 11:11pm
gone only briefly. your muse is always close,
she struggles to cling to you as you run...
she struggles to cling to you as you run...
Anonymous
16th Jun 2016 3:41am
Your mind shall always play My Sultry Savaja...a hiccup here and there but there is always a reason why and when it returns (as I see a sprouting bud) it shall with a vengeance and I CAN'T WAIT!!!! Love to you always gorgeous.
With love - Schiitaryn xoxo
With love - Schiitaryn xoxo
16th Jun 2016 9:51am
To overcome write, write, yeah even if it be shite. Thou wilt engage thy brain again soon or late for thou art great!
16th Jun 2016 10:39am
I know that feeling ... I hate that feeling; but it's such a joy when the ink flows again.
16th Jun 2016 7:14pm
You're playing fine, and writing even better. I've been going through a struggle myself along these lines, but not quite gone. This is excellent work, terse and strong, and I'm glad to see you're still around Savaja. You're one of the best.
17th Jun 2016 00:39am
The creative process isn't linear
and hits in most unexpected hours
but you should not be so harsh with yourself
and all of your exquisite powers
and hits in most unexpected hours
but you should not be so harsh with yourself
and all of your exquisite powers
18th Jun 2016 2:27am
Loved loved loved it...an instant stand up and applause then simple curtsy bow from me
21st Jun 2016 2:34pm
yes, this
of late it feels
as tho i birth
the bones of words
without flesh ...
... bereft indeed
but life, oracle mine,
it does take its toll
on creativity
xox
of late it feels
as tho i birth
the bones of words
without flesh ...
... bereft indeed
but life, oracle mine,
it does take its toll
on creativity
xox
Anonymous
24th Jun 2016 8:22pm
nice work sav
