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Once he felt essence Of...
N' She adorned the stars with
hugs, meant for him to catch
he ran thru the night in hopes
of each one to fetch...
N' as each was caught
naught any had he missed,
he'd return them with the
depth of an ocean's kiss...
As she bargained with the moon
'gainst the gaudy windswept night
he had pray'd she received the love
fed pon' his passion's sight...
N' so it 'twas as it should've been
treasured touches n' kisses blend
cultivation' of a dream set aflight...
hugs, meant for him to catch
he ran thru the night in hopes
of each one to fetch...
N' as each was caught
naught any had he missed,
he'd return them with the
depth of an ocean's kiss...
As she bargained with the moon
'gainst the gaudy windswept night
he had pray'd she received the love
fed pon' his passion's sight...
N' so it 'twas as it should've been
treasured touches n' kisses blend
cultivation' of a dream set aflight...
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Re. Once he felt essence Of...
Anonymous
14th Jun 2016 3:30am
PM!! Oh!! OH!!
"N' as each was caught
naught any had he missed,
he'd return them with the
depth of an ocean's kiss..." <~~ this made eyes mist!
!!!!!
$+@% ;^,&*£ ${@@!!!!!!!!!! 👀👀👀!!!
That's it...RL it goes!!! OMG....
~ Taryn
"N' as each was caught
naught any had he missed,
he'd return them with the
depth of an ocean's kiss..." <~~ this made eyes mist!
!!!!!
$+@% ;^,&*£ ${@@!!!!!!!!!! 👀👀👀!!!
That's it...RL it goes!!! OMG....
~ Taryn
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Re: Re. Once he felt essence Of...
14th Jun 2016 3:32am
Aaawwww... My sweet sweet Taryn... I heart you! :) thank u so much my dearest :)
Re. Once he felt essence Of...
14th Jun 2016 3:38am
So beautifully spread out for one to caress and taste with longing. So lovely! ☺
Willow
Willow
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Re: Re. Once he felt essence Of...
14th Jun 2016 4:12am
Yea... Too bad I ain't lucky enough to have anyone accept it... Thank you, appreciate ur support
Re. Once he felt essence Of...
Anonymous
14th Jun 2016 3:45am
Ahhh, fair makes the heart sigh. Beautifully expressed! 😉
Timid
Timid
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Re: Re. Once he felt essence Of...
14th Jun 2016 4:14am
Re. Once he felt essence Of...
14th Jun 2016 5:36am
Ahh shit Poetik, you've taken it
back to Shakespearian era days.
This was fine writing Bro.
Dantalyon
back to Shakespearian era days.
This was fine writing Bro.
Dantalyon
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Re: Re. Once he felt essence Of...
14th Jun 2016 12:06pm
Aaawww bro. Ur awesome! Thank you so much as always your comments are like breaths of fresh air :). Truly grateful for your support :)
Re. Once he felt essence Of...
Anonymous
14th Jun 2016 10:22am
Hey Poet......I'm speechless over this brilliant piece of word art......RL for me......luvin it......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Once he felt essence Of...
14th Jun 2016 12:08pm
Honored it made your list sweet flower! Thank you kindly... Muah! Appreciate u! :)
Re. Once he felt essence Of...
14th Jun 2016 8:23pm
I love the ambiance set my night stars.. It resonates beautifully for your message; I absolutely love it!
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Re: Re. Once he felt essence Of...
14th Jun 2016 10:50pm
Ur so special I'm sure you know how happy your comment made me :)... Deeply grateful to you VM. :)
Re. Once he felt essence Of...
14th Jun 2016 8:36pm
Re: Re. Once he felt essence Of...
14th Jun 2016 10:56pm
Hey sweetheart, great to hear from u again... N I thank you kindly for your support :)
Re. Once he felt essence Of...
15th Jun 2016 9:10am
Re: Re. Once he felt essence Of...
15th Jun 2016 11:56am
Hey T, been a long time... Thanks a bunch I'm honored for the comment n RL add. Appreciate you greatly :)
Re. Once he felt essence Of...
Anonymous
- Edited 15th Jun 2016 12:49pm
15th Jun 2016 12:48pm
Wish someone wrote this to
me
..you sure do know how to
make a woman feel.her heart
beat in every part of her
unknown/ known ..
Im seething underneath
..seeing red, feeling oceanic
blue with a hint of fucking
seaweed greenery
Lol, damn it :)
Thank you for the early morning
venting love
me
..you sure do know how to
make a woman feel.her heart
beat in every part of her
unknown/ known ..
Im seething underneath
..seeing red, feeling oceanic
blue with a hint of fucking
seaweed greenery
Lol, damn it :)
Thank you for the early morning
venting love
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Re: Re. Once he felt essence Of...
15th Jun 2016 12:54pm
Aaaawww... Well you know by now
my heart is filled, n my head still just dreams... I'm happy if it made you feel
good in any way :) thank you, I'm deeply honored.
my heart is filled, n my head still just dreams... I'm happy if it made you feel
good in any way :) thank you, I'm deeply honored.
Re. Once he felt essence Of...
16th Jun 2016 1:10am
Poe pure celestial beauty in this write..
love this my friend..
"As she bargained with the moon
'gainst the gaudy windswept night
he had pray'd she received the love
fed pon' his passion's sight..."
heart is swooning :)
love Crim
love this my friend..
"As she bargained with the moon
'gainst the gaudy windswept night
he had pray'd she received the love
fed pon' his passion's sight..."
heart is swooning :)
love Crim
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Re: Re. Once he felt essence Of...
16th Jun 2016 3:36am
Re. Once he felt essence Of...
17th Jun 2016 3:19pm
Re: Re. Once he felt essence Of...
18th Jun 2016 11:14am
Aaaawwww...well I'm happy to know you enjoyed my dear Lady R... :) truly
grateful for your continued support always! :)
grateful for your continued support always! :)
Re. Once he felt essence Of...
17th Jun 2016 9:07pm
I Have Returned ;)
You never cease to amaze and inspire me. This is truly gorgeous. Words cannot express the beauty in this piece. So magically written. I must add it to my "collection". Write On.
~Dia
You never cease to amaze and inspire me. This is truly gorgeous. Words cannot express the beauty in this piece. So magically written. I must add it to my "collection". Write On.
~Dia
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Re: Re. Once he felt essence Of...
20th Jun 2016 2:50pm
Im beyond happy for your return
Sadly I'm not sure what you're name was before becuz I don't recall this name...:( STILL I'm honored deeply for you n your support :)
Sadly I'm not sure what you're name was before becuz I don't recall this name...:( STILL I'm honored deeply for you n your support :)
Re. Once he felt essence Of...
Anonymous
19th Jun 2016 9:28pm
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Re: Re. Once he felt essence Of...
20th Jun 2016 2:56pm
Thank you. I'm honored you thought so, n truly appreciate your thoughts n time :)
Re. Once he felt essence Of...
21st Jun 2016 9:52am
swooning at my desk
ohh my lawd papi
how i've missed reading
your verse & flow
this is gorjus
xoxox
ohh my lawd papi
how i've missed reading
your verse & flow
this is gorjus
xoxox
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Re: Re. Once he felt essence Of...
21st Jun 2016 9:07pm
Aaawww my precious beauty!! I've missed yours too! Thank you welcome back :)
Honored as always :)
Honored as always :)
Re. Once he felt essence Of...
Anonymous
21st Jun 2016 11:02am
so loving and gentle, feels magical
exquisite, my poetik friend
exquisite, my poetik friend
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Re: Re. Once he felt essence Of...
21st Jun 2016 9:14pm
You're so very kind. Thank you my sweet Niki, truly humbled by your praise... :)
Re. Once he felt essence Of...
Anonymous
4th Jul 2016 3:52pm
N' to be capture by essence
divinity so pure
N' to be devoured within pleasance
a delight to procure
visual excellence rendered
"you had me at first key" ;-) dkruie
divinity so pure
N' to be devoured within pleasance
a delight to procure
visual excellence rendered
"you had me at first key" ;-) dkruie
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Re: Re. Once he felt essence Of...
4th Jul 2016 7:46pm
Aaawwww thanks so much bro! I'm honored... Truly grateful I am for your continued support :)
Re. Once he felt essence Of...
5th Jul 2016 9:26pm
Well alrighty then, taking it back old English style lol... I tell you that you are very talented and very versatile, keep it up mister... Very aristotle like lol.... Get your book out... :)
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Re: Re. Once he felt essence Of...
6th Jul 2016 6:21pm
Lmao, Aristotle huh? Wow, you got me
blushing like Chesthire cat now lol
Deeply appreciate your fantastic
sweet words my dear, n yea let me go git that thang n study up! lol
blushing like Chesthire cat now lol
Deeply appreciate your fantastic
sweet words my dear, n yea let me go git that thang n study up! lol
Re. Once he felt essence Of...
1st Dec 2016 4:43am
One word is all I can assemble: Beautiful
but somehow even beyond
-Howlings
but somehow even beyond
-Howlings
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Re: Re. Once he felt essence Of...
1st Dec 2016 7:54am
One word is fine as long as u liked it! :) thank you my sweetness, truly, I'm grateful for your support :)
Re. Once he felt essence Of...
Anonymous
1st Nov 2017 2:20pm
Found this treasure. My oh my..
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1st Nov 2017 8:52pm