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Succubus
Succubus
She webs me in her spidery touch
Fingers weave sticky strands
In golden threads of honey pleasure
Till her calyx grips me in trance
With succubus seduction
Her lips ring round my rosy
In ever deepening circles
Each lick lofts me higher
Till my apocalyptic angel
Swallows me whole
She webs me in her spidery touch
Fingers weave sticky strands
In golden threads of honey pleasure
Till her calyx grips me in trance
With succubus seduction
Her lips ring round my rosy
In ever deepening circles
Each lick lofts me higher
Till my apocalyptic angel
Swallows me whole
Published 7th Jun 2016
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7th Jun 2016 11:08am
her calyx grips me in trance ... I love this line.
There's a psycho sexual tension to this that's engaging yet speaks to the dangers within this relationship ...
Reminds me of a piece I wrote ... When the Old Hag Rides ... she came all to often in my early life, scaring me beyond words ...
Cool ink.
There's a psycho sexual tension to this that's engaging yet speaks to the dangers within this relationship ...
Reminds me of a piece I wrote ... When the Old Hag Rides ... she came all to often in my early life, scaring me beyond words ...
Cool ink.
7th Jun 2016 1:01pm
Thanks so much LobodeSanPedro. Love your take on my poem. Your reflections are very much appreciated. :)
John
John
7th Jun 2016 3:53pm
Oh I love to read about your sticky nights love...and then like this....gorgeous !
All my deep devotion and love
Jen
All my deep devotion and love
Jen
7th Jun 2016 3:53pm
Oh I love to read about your sticky nights love...and then like this....gorgeous !
All my deep devotion and love
Jen
All my deep devotion and love
Jen
7th Jun 2016 6:42pm
My sweetie pie I love to feed you with my naughty verse. You make writing more pleasurable than I've ever known. ;-)
Love and joy from me to you,
John
Love and joy from me to you,
John
I liked the loss of consciousness implied in the last line. This is what sex is all about.
Have you read my Arrival of the 69 Angel? These angels exist and are amongst us, as you know.
Have you read my Arrival of the 69 Angel? These angels exist and are amongst us, as you know.
8th Jun 2016 3:01am
candycrier, I thank you from my heart. I haven't read that particular book/poem. But indeed the angels do exist and are among us. Much gratitude.
John
John
4th Sep 2016 3:39am
The title made me smile, because I have a Succubus poem myself...
Love this one!
Love this one!
4th Sep 2016 4:32am
You've made me smile too Duende! Love that you enjoyed m Succubus poem. :)
John
John
