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Ω OMEGA Ω
Where did it come from
before my own existence,
gender not withstanding.
The freshly minted self
defied carbon dating
while shadows paced in circles,
recalling newborn legends
with old souls honing in on
piercing cries from birds of prey.
Remembering times of
desert seas alive with whales
becoming cliffs of bone
raised from trails of dust,
pulling down what was mine,
carried me 'till the next chase.
With nature's way, my DNA,
not the will of my pursuers,
their scratchings set in stele.
Unbowed, with instincts
through life's brief returns,
to stalk the self-proclaimed.
before my own existence,
gender not withstanding.
The freshly minted self
defied carbon dating
while shadows paced in circles,
recalling newborn legends
with old souls honing in on
piercing cries from birds of prey.
Remembering times of
desert seas alive with whales
becoming cliffs of bone
raised from trails of dust,
pulling down what was mine,
carried me 'till the next chase.
With nature's way, my DNA,
not the will of my pursuers,
their scratchings set in stele.
Unbowed, with instincts
through life's brief returns,
to stalk the self-proclaimed.
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 24th May 2016
| Edited 19th Jan 2019
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Re. Ω OMEGA Ω
Anonymous
24th May 2016 4:44pm
I've often wondered some of the same things, Jade.
A well expressed and exquisitely worded piece here. Timing is spot on too. Well penned.
thanks :)
A well expressed and exquisitely worded piece here. Timing is spot on too. Well penned.
thanks :)
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24th May 2016 4:54pm
Thank you Miki, I'm honored by your share of clarity to my expressions. You definitely know how it goes.
With gratitude.
With gratitude.
Re. Ω OMEGA Ω
24th May 2016 5:16pm
I too have often wondered where we came from before we were here in the flesh..
were we gathered amongst the stars living beings awaiting our arrival on Earth?
thought provoking write lovely Jade..
so beautifully done..
love Crim
were we gathered amongst the stars living beings awaiting our arrival on Earth?
thought provoking write lovely Jade..
so beautifully done..
love Crim
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26th May 2016 1:43pm
Lovely Crim, precious soul, I'm honored that my humble effort gives one reason to think about our purpose.
With my thanks & love,
Jade
With my thanks & love,
Jade
Re. Ω OMEGA Ω
24th May 2016 5:25pm
Intuitive write. No pun intended.
Jade was able to capture the mystery and science of 'instinct.'
Jade was able to capture the mystery and science of 'instinct.'
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26th May 2016 1:54pm
My humble thanks to you, dear Kim, to give this mere pebble such credit. I'll continue to strive to live up to this.
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24th May 2016 6:24pm
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26th May 2016 1:57pm
Re. Ω OMEGA Ω
26th May 2016 3:20am
Unbowed, with instincts
through life's brief returns
to stalk the self-proclaimed.
I love this ending, what a excellent expression of the undaunted...
geoff
through life's brief returns
to stalk the self-proclaimed.
I love this ending, what a excellent expression of the undaunted...
geoff
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26th May 2016 2:01pm
With humble thanks to you Geoff. I do try to reflect true thoughts from this pebble.
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28th May 2016 11:34am
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Gracious thanks to you, Esme-Bea. I love that name, and welcome to DUP.
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