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are you like me?
waiting for that rare gem
that makes you feel something anything?
a story or a damn fine observational piece
taking you out of yourself for the moment
walking in landscapes you have yet to experience in your body
a mind change, a quick fix
or something of substance that sticks with you
long after you've read them
while slumbering I had a dream
hearing each of you reciting
reading in unique voices your poetry
upon waking I realized that's what we have here
deep underground each pouring out their soul
in diverse styles and form
my mind's eye opened understanding
this is a place of great beauty
with so many gems to behold
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Anonymous
22nd May 2016 3:59pm
a lovely piece from your lovely soul, Crim
there's magic in here for sure.
and your pen is a gem I'm grateful for
xx
there's magic in here for sure.
and your pen is a gem I'm grateful for
xx
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22nd May 2016 4:37pm
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22nd May 2016 4:12pm
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22nd May 2016 4:37pm
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22nd May 2016 4:17pm
Digging up diamonds in the rough from deep underground!
Yes, my shovel gets heavy at the end of the day but striking oil and seeing a new poem burst from the well into words on virgin paper, ahh the ink gushes so passionately...
JJ
Yes, my shovel gets heavy at the end of the day but striking oil and seeing a new poem burst from the well into words on virgin paper, ahh the ink gushes so passionately...
JJ
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22nd May 2016 4:38pm
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Anonymous
22nd May 2016 4:45pm
Interesting dear Crimson
Myself this morning acknowledging
The beauty of vurnability
Shackles freed of past haunts
Love that of your ink always
<3 dkruie
Myself this morning acknowledging
The beauty of vurnability
Shackles freed of past haunts
Love that of your ink always
<3 dkruie
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Re: Re. writers
22nd May 2016 5:00pm
beauty in vulnerability sigh I have to strive to find comfort in my own vulnerability..
thank you Dkruie :)
love Crim
thank you Dkruie :)
love Crim
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Anonymous
22nd May 2016 5:09pm
Vulnerability the only real connection of soul... True beauty attained is that of which what can away be taken. Within pain and suffering, growth we are gifted 😘
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22nd May 2016 5:14pm
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22nd May 2016 4:48pm
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22nd May 2016 5:02pm
thank you Michael I know this place will forever remain a special place..
love Brenda
love Brenda
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I find a lot of inspiration from my two lost decades,
Brenda.They are mostly dark poems. If I am needing
inspiration of another kind it is a short walk to the bank
of Bayou Lafourche. (Alligators are there in abundance).
Plus it is just a great place to sit/lay and behold its beauty.
Sometimes I imagine the pirates bold who used to sail
the waters of south Louisiana. Of course there are the
presence of voodoo around these swamps.
Brenda.They are mostly dark poems. If I am needing
inspiration of another kind it is a short walk to the bank
of Bayou Lafourche. (Alligators are there in abundance).
Plus it is just a great place to sit/lay and behold its beauty.
Sometimes I imagine the pirates bold who used to sail
the waters of south Louisiana. Of course there are the
presence of voodoo around these swamps.
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22nd May 2016 7:37pm
I feel you on that Jerry as much of my inspiration comes from a dark past as well..
such an enchanting place you describe is your home..
thank you..
love Brenda
such an enchanting place you describe is your home..
thank you..
love Brenda
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22nd May 2016 6:36pm
This is definitely the place to divulge
the heart and soul Brenda, and to also
allow the creative juices to flow-out of
ourselves, providing hydrant to others
to help them.
And, you are one who undoubtedly
offers nourishment with your writes
of amazement.
Dantalyon
the heart and soul Brenda, and to also
allow the creative juices to flow-out of
ourselves, providing hydrant to others
to help them.
And, you are one who undoubtedly
offers nourishment with your writes
of amazement.
Dantalyon
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22nd May 2016 7:38pm
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Anonymous
22nd May 2016 7:04pm
My Beautiful Brenda, so many gems indeed and most certainly you being one of them...your poetry allows us to experience so many realms of consciousness and emotions that captures us, gifting us always...I am so grateful for your presence in my life as well as here in the underground.
I love you so much!
Xoxoxox Taryn
I love you so much!
Xoxoxox Taryn
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22nd May 2016 7:39pm
beautiful one so grateful you are here..
smiling widely today :)
thank you for such a loving comment..
I love you..
xoxo Brenda
smiling widely today :)
thank you for such a loving comment..
I love you..
xoxo Brenda
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22nd May 2016 11:56pm
YES - I am very much like you in this respect - an excellent poem and an easy list add - inspiring stuff :-)
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23rd May 2016 00:20am
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Anonymous
- Edited 23rd May 2016 1:52am
23rd May 2016 1:44am
Precious Beautiful Soul.......what a great write.......I can tell you this.......this is one of the added gems here.......writen by your heart and soul that shines like a rare sparkling diamond.......an Angel who walks among us.......RL add on for me.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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23rd May 2016 2:35am
lovely Flower you've moved my heart greatly with the love you've shown me and this write :)
love Crim
love Crim
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23rd May 2016 3:59am
a quick fix, or a leisurely floating high,
we find them here among the poems & poets.
beautiful sentiment, Crim...
we find them here among the poems & poets.
beautiful sentiment, Crim...
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23rd May 2016 4:19am
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23rd May 2016 6:08pm
You found your perfect way to describe us all. The sadists, the lovers, the angry, the spiritual, and the lost.
Thank you, Crimsin
Thank you, Crimsin
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23rd May 2016 6:23pm
thank you Sir yes the dream was really something because the poets in the dream were so powerful in their unique readings I realized I don't always fully appreciate the great beauty of the diversity we have here..
love Crim
love Crim
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23rd May 2016 8:43pm
Wonderful tribute to the dreamers of DUP. There's so much variety here, from Extreme Content to mild. It can be a glimpse into someone's soul.. I like what I see in yours, Crim.
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23rd May 2016 8:43pm
Wonderful tribute to the dreamers of DUP. There's so much variety here, from Extreme Content to mild. It can be a glimpse into someone's soul.. I like what I see in yours, Crim.
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23rd May 2016 9:11pm
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25th May 2016 9:24pm
Yesss, my lady. You explored this
so elegant and tangible.
We are but wells giving and taking
..sharing energies through our inks.
I love this, my tinyfreakinggods.
-Howlings
so elegant and tangible.
We are but wells giving and taking
..sharing energies through our inks.
I love this, my tinyfreakinggods.
-Howlings
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