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Community Feast
Welcome my neighbors
To our community feast
Please don't eat the most
If you come with the least
Sneaking a freebie?
I hope you'll think twice
Don't drink my Yeungling
If you brought Natty Ice
Why you wrappin up sirloin?
Heading home to your house
When them four wings you came with
Wouldn't feed a damn mouse
Your kids can't have peanuts
Yes I do understand
But why you doggin the farmer
Bringing the soul of his land?
You downplay the soldiers
Who bleed so you don't
Don't tell a duty bound man how to fight
If your Bitch Ass won't
Too mean
Too aggressive
Always something to say
When it's time to put work in
Some just stay in the way
The ones who bring the least
Pile the most on their plates
And then complain bout the seasoning
That's some shit this man hates
To our community feast
Please don't eat the most
If you come with the least
Sneaking a freebie?
I hope you'll think twice
Don't drink my Yeungling
If you brought Natty Ice
Why you wrappin up sirloin?
Heading home to your house
When them four wings you came with
Wouldn't feed a damn mouse
Your kids can't have peanuts
Yes I do understand
But why you doggin the farmer
Bringing the soul of his land?
You downplay the soldiers
Who bleed so you don't
Don't tell a duty bound man how to fight
If your Bitch Ass won't
Too mean
Too aggressive
Always something to say
When it's time to put work in
Some just stay in the way
The ones who bring the least
Pile the most on their plates
And then complain bout the seasoning
That's some shit this man hates
Published 20th May 2016
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20th May 2016 3:15pm
20th May 2016 5:48pm
So very true. Like Lil Wayne said, "Ask for a sandwich, then say they don't eat mustard"
Want a handout then complain that it ain't top shelf
Want a handout then complain that it ain't top shelf
20th May 2016 3:50pm
20th May 2016 5:50pm
Sadly, as have I. Folks who complain about high crime rates and harsh tactics are beyond my understanding
20th May 2016 4:21pm
20th May 2016 5:59pm
Anonymous
20th May 2016 5:09pm
speak that bro!!!!!
Very well written and so on point!!!!
Very well written and so on point!!!!
21st May 2016 10:47pm
20th May 2016 5:48pm
Kinda feel a bit jealous TBH...must be nice to have a community where you can have this feast in the first place
:)
:)
20th May 2016 5:58pm
Come on beautiful one. America as individuals is one big community full of people willing to help. Look at GoFundMe's, the Red Cross, and Wounded Warrior. The ASPCA, and PETA even, are full of people who want to pitch in. The problems arise when the stomach loves being full of food yet complains about the way the hands and mouth rip apart a steak or plate of cabbage to deliver that feeling of fullness. Each part should do what it does best and let the others do the same.
Anonymous
21st May 2016 4:59am
Feeling every line..
nothing else to be said..
nothing else to be said..
21st May 2016 10:47pm
4th Jun 2016 2:37pm
Selfishness runs deep in those who believe in "me, myself and I".
A very real write!
JJ
A very real write!
JJ
13th Jun 2016 4:03pm
With a brother who makes a living coaching and my dabbling here and there into the field this reminds me of the common held belief that the harshest critic of athletics is found in the stands, coming from someone who has very little idea about all the dynamics of getting a team to operate at a high level.
