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Darkest Lord
unleash on me let me feel your wrath
wrap me in your serpentine arms
constrict my heart as it pounds within my chest
threatening to burst from my bloodied cavity
feeling your rage the apocalypse that is you
crashing through the doors of my mind
forcing me to submit to your will of steel
I bow before your throne
calling to you my Darkest Lord
from the place of oblivion
where you reside in a desecrated tomb
enthralled by your forked tongue
that delves deep within my soul
in the place of purgatory where I am imprisoned
free me from this state of nothingness
tear the veil from my face that leaves me confounded
oh Dark one my lust for you is unbridled
as I writhe in dreams at midnight
feeling your terror as it enflames me
come upon me my Lord tear into this lowly denizen
feast upon my offering
let the beast in you loose
upon pale wanton flesh
splayed on your blackened altar
feed me your cummunal offering
from your forked member
let me see visions of you
in all your darkened glory
unleash on me let me feel your wrath
wrap me in your serpentine arms
constrict my heart as it pounds within my chest
threatening to burst from my bloodied cavity
as I wail out my lament
I await you on hands and knees
your wretched slave
collared for your pleasure
writhing in insane torment
your power the fire I give into
greater than I in Hell's domain
I succumb to your greatness
feeling your rage the apocalypse that is you
crashing through the doors of my mind
forcing me to submit to your will of steel
I bow before your throne
Published 17th May 2016
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Anonymous
17th May 2016 6:03am
Bjeez just to watch or be
a hhm, let's say
an observant?
mmmh, I lost me words
fuck ..
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a hhm, let's say
an observant?
mmmh, I lost me words
fuck ..
-
17th May 2016 1:51pm
17th May 2016 6:04am
Another awesome entry. It's like every piece of you touch shines brighter than the stars. Bravo!
17th May 2016 1:52pm
thank you Darkest Lord Hades a better compliment I couldn't help to receive..
love Crimsin
love Crimsin
17th May 2016 6:37am
firstly, i need that mask in the pic... shite, it's hot ...
ahem anyhoo...
... this was all kinds of dark delight
striking images {as always}
"the apocalypse that is you"
^^^^^^
was sheer brilliance,
loved that you saw fit to repeat it ^.^
a stunning write, beautiful one
xoxox
ahem anyhoo...
... this was all kinds of dark delight
striking images {as always}
"the apocalypse that is you"
^^^^^^
was sheer brilliance,
loved that you saw fit to repeat it ^.^
a stunning write, beautiful one
xoxox
17th May 2016 1:53pm
thank you beautiful Katja the mask is quite wicked ;)
love to you..
xoxo Brenda
love to you..
xoxo Brenda
17th May 2016 6:47am
the torment is so much a part of the bliss,
suffering into orgasm.
sensually demented, Crim...
suffering into orgasm.
sensually demented, Crim...
17th May 2016 1:54pm
17th May 2016 1:03pm
Marines know full well that pain is merely weakness leaving one's body. You Crimsin are surely becoming the most powerful person alive as you seek to drive weakness away. No wonder you seek a Dark Lord. No mere human can deliver what you crave
17th May 2016 1:55pm
17th May 2016 1:19pm
To be enthralled with the dark is a personal choice
many more people desire, but are afraid to let
themselves go to. There is no doubt there is a bit of
S/M in most of us. You thrilled me Crim in this write
and has elevated your wish to a higher, or lower order.
Stunning write!
many more people desire, but are afraid to let
themselves go to. There is no doubt there is a bit of
S/M in most of us. You thrilled me Crim in this write
and has elevated your wish to a higher, or lower order.
Stunning write!
17th May 2016 1:56pm
17th May 2016 2:53pm
Crimsin!
Good greif woman!
you are the queen of the damned!
I love the way you express yourself always eye and mind candy...
Great write Sissy!
Loves you
(((((((((Brenda)))))))
Jackie xoxox
Good greif woman!
you are the queen of the damned!
I love the way you express yourself always eye and mind candy...
Great write Sissy!
Loves you
(((((((((Brenda)))))))
Jackie xoxox
17th May 2016 6:01pm
18th May 2016 1:33am
The Dark Lord I'm sure would be honored to give such a heated n willing woman her just deserves lol
Smoking, n dark!! :)
Smoking, n dark!! :)
18th May 2016 2:23am
Anonymous
18th May 2016 2:09am
My Beautiful Brenda...so many lines in this that I adore and a bit of a step outside of what is normally seen...I immediately saw it and I loved it!!
"feed me your cummunal offering
from your forked member
let me see visions of you
in all your darkened glory
unleash on me let me feel your wrath
wrap me in your serpentine arms
constrict my heart as it pounds within my chest
threatening to burst from my bloodied cavity"
I love you!!
With all my love always - Taryn xoxo
"feed me your cummunal offering
from your forked member
let me see visions of you
in all your darkened glory
unleash on me let me feel your wrath
wrap me in your serpentine arms
constrict my heart as it pounds within my chest
threatening to burst from my bloodied cavity"
I love you!!
With all my love always - Taryn xoxo
18th May 2016 2:24am
aw thank you beautiful one a big smile is gracing my face :)
so much love I have for you..
xoxo Brenda
so much love I have for you..
xoxo Brenda
Anonymous
19th May 2016 2:42am
Wowzers!!!! BRAVO Crim!! What a great write......can't even gather my words for this one......tipping my pen in respect & luv to you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
19th May 2016 3:58am
Anonymous
20th May 2016 1:50am
Brenda, only you.. make the Dark Lord, sound like the man.. i'm just in awe, as i always am.. brilliant dark scribe, as only your Crimsin ink can pen.. love..
Dave
Dave
20th May 2016 3:25am
20th May 2016 2:46am
you write with such skill and beauty about the darkest of things - this one shows up exactly why I enjoy your work despite it not being my genre - you have turned me on to the dark stuff :-}
20th May 2016 3:25am
12th Jun 2019 2:42am
This is really excellent, you've even captured his style of writing and repetition of stanzas, amazing tribute, wow..
12th Jun 2019 3:27pm
