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'The Reality of being Real'
First thing
in the mornin'
again,
I'll be mournin...'
A lone sole,
adrift in soul
n' idle...
since the idol
I ideally dreamt
wasn't real...
so I reel, undone
as your world whirls
like 'minute capsules'
veiled, in yore...
yet, the quartz
on the clock of my
beaten heart,
continuously
spills quarts of blue...
pain, though thru my
pane, you can't even
see...
the sea of roses
I've lain, in rows of hue
that spelled out how much
I truly needed you...
and for once,
you to see
just how much
I truly loved you...
Published 3rd May 2016
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ugh the wordplay make me damn greenjelly, poe
it flows from you so effortlessly
i do so love a well placed homonym ^.^
this is so melodious
*hint hint*
read it aloud, please?
it flows from you so effortlessly
i do so love a well placed homonym ^.^
this is so melodious
*hint hint*
read it aloud, please?
3rd May 2016 12:49pm
For you? Anything baby... :) I'm getting ready for work though, so it'll have to wait a bit ok? Anyways, thank you soooooo much mami for this very comment n the list add, I'm super flattered :)
Anonymous
3rd May 2016 1:40pm
the epitome of a Poetik mind....
3rd May 2016 1:54pm
3rd May 2016 2:00pm
Fucking beautiful .... As i started reading i thought damn ... damn.. You have an aquatic flow i believe your name fits you perfectly .. I've ready poetry for the first time in a long time .. Nice to meet you .. I'm Devilish
3rd May 2016 2:08pm
God what a beautiful comment, matching what looks like a beautiful face :) deeply grateful, n nice to meet you Mrs Devilish :)
3rd May 2016 2:16pm
Damn fine wordplay and more to the point, none of it felt like it was forcing or driving the poem but fitted perfectly into it and enhanced it.
3rd May 2016 2:24pm
I'm thinking you're a very writer yourself lady, so u need to spill! :) love your thoughts, n can addicted to hearing them :) thank u so much lady :)
3rd May 2016 2:43pm
ah Poe so beautiful this really reached into my heart with this one must take it to my list..
I love you..
xoxo Crim
I love you..
xoxo Crim
3rd May 2016 2:52pm
3rd May 2016 4:52pm
Wow, how incredibly clever and original. You're so inspiring in so many different ways.
3rd May 2016 7:16pm
Aaaawwww....why thank you my sweetheart, I'm deeply flattered :)
n I appreciate your support always
n I appreciate your support always
Anonymous
4th May 2016 00:42am
Hey Poet......take a bow with this one......you've earned it as you always do.......brilliant!! Enjoyed......purple luv & hugs xo :)
4th May 2016 1:02am
Anonymous
5th May 2016 00:59am
PM, talented you are I have known this for some time but this...this had something different about it...moved me deeply as it crept in because of the flow which it fell from my tongue... Outstanding...
With love - Taryn xoxo
With love - Taryn xoxo
5th May 2016 1:52am
Taryn, I could kiss u for this comment!
It's so sweet, so heartfelt... I'm grateful, thank u so much... :)
It's so sweet, so heartfelt... I'm grateful, thank u so much... :)
Anonymous
5th May 2016 2:05am
I have a problem.
and this is beautiful.
and this is beautiful.
5th May 2016 2:07am
Huh? You have a problem? with what?
Oh n thank you my dear I truly appreciate your sweet words.
Oh n thank you my dear I truly appreciate your sweet words.
Anonymous
5th May 2016 3:38am
Just forgot my words earlier
5th May 2016 9:13am
